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    How I feel about her... (Poem of thoughts)

    An angelic chorus,
    on the other end of the cell.
    Your voice I hear for the,
    first time since I've known you.

    Your red hair glimmers,
    like a raging fire.
    Your curls like those,
    found only in one's dreams.

    A crush has befallen me again,
    since it was the very one I had,
    when I first met you,
    at that little place in cyberspace.

    You're no closer to me,
    than the rest of the world.
    Yet in this time and moment,
    you're in my heart like all my friends.

    I first got my crush,
    when i first saw you.
    Then you found someone,
    only to be hurt in the end by them.

    However,
    it was not I that cared for you.
    it was you that cared for me,
    by wanting me to contact you.

    i scared you with my brokenness,
    and i couldn't imagine a tear,
    on that lovely face of yours,
    without feeling guilty for putting it there.

    I can't love you yet,
    but i can treat you like the others.
    i will defend you if you need it,
    protect you if i must.

    one way or another,
    i want you to realize that i care,
    and that no red curl will ever,
    be endangered ever again.


    By: White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: How I feel about her... (Poem of thoughts)

    well this poem is a real heart wrencher.
    It is sad, but I think that is what you were going for.
    so I congratulate you on a poem well done.

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    Re: How I feel about her... (Poem of thoughts)

    cyber space is the best place for fantasy
    and rescuing somone from bad people the way
    portray love online is really good , alot of people
    fall inlove online and pretend but they call it real
    and try to meet.

    your poem here is realy great at explaining how people take online
    love to the next level of fantasy and try to make it real i cant wait
    to read your next poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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