Thread: How I Feel Around You

I really like this work of yours! especially these parts;

When I’m not with you I feel blue and When I’m with you and close,There’s no place I rather be most

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It's cause "blue" refers to loneliness or sadness, it's easy to see it beacuse when you said "I'm not with you" it actually depicts loneliness or sadness.For the second one, everyone that will read through it cause of these;"when I'm with you, there's no place I rather be the most" reading it will probably haev anyone think that you really loved him and you don't to be separated from him.It's been a while when I visited AO and again I read a grear piece of work

Originally Posted by receiverofhell

I really like this work of yours! especially these parts; .
It's cause "blue" refers to loneliness or sadness, it's easy to see it beacuse when you said "I'm not with you" it actually depicts loneliness or sadness.For the second one, everyone that will read through it cause of these;"when I'm with you, there's no place I rather be the most" reading it will probably haev anyone think that you really loved him and you don't to be separated from him.It's been a while when I visited AO and again I read a grear piece of work

Aw why thank you I am very happy to see someone that really likes my work and see the meaning behind it. Thank you!

At least this is speechless. I'll give you 10/10 points for it.

Aw why thank you I am very happy to see someone that really likes my work and see the meaning behind it. Thank you!

Nah , don't mention it dark angle.I was just happy to see that the poem section is getting alive again.

Originally Posted by receiverofhell

Nah , don't mention it dark angle.I was just happy to see that the poem section is getting alive again.

Yeah, I know there are some good poems on here I just like writing poems that are about love and come from my heart.

eah, I know there are some good poems on here I just like writing poems that are about love and come from my heart.

Yah the same here, I like to write poems in my heart's content.I also like to write love poems

I love your poem. i think that it is beautiful. I am happy to say that this is the best poem that i have ever read. Great job. Make MORE!!