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    How I Feel Around You

    I love your gentle touch,
    When you’re gone I miss it so much…
    Your sweet gentle kiss upon my lips
    The way you bring your arms around my hips,

    The way I feel when you say, “I love you”
    When I’m not with you I feel blue,
    Love how you’re always able to put a smile on my face,
    Knowing our love will never go to waste

    These feelings we have will last forever
    I know this will be our happy ever after,
    Always forever just you and me
    That’s the way it’s meant to be,

    When we’re apart I am so blue
    Knowing I can’t be beside you…
    When I’m with you and close,
    There’s no place I rather be most

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    I really like this work of yours! especially these parts;
    When I’m not with you I feel blue and When I’m with you and close,There’s no place I rather be most
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    It's cause "blue" refers to loneliness or sadness, it's easy to see it beacuse when you said "I'm not with you" it actually depicts loneliness or sadness.For the second one, everyone that will read through it cause of these;"when I'm with you, there's no place I rather be the most" reading it will probably haev anyone think that you really loved him and you don't to be separated from him.It's been a while when I visited AO and again I read a grear piece of work
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    I really like this work of yours! especially these parts; .
    It's cause "blue" refers to loneliness or sadness, it's easy to see it beacuse when you said "I'm not with you" it actually depicts loneliness or sadness.For the second one, everyone that will read through it cause of these;"when I'm with you, there's no place I rather be the most" reading it will probably haev anyone think that you really loved him and you don't to be separated from him.It's been a while when I visited AO and again I read a grear piece of work
    Aw why thank you I am very happy to see someone that really likes my work and see the meaning behind it. Thank you!

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    At least this is speechless. I'll give you 10/10 points for it.

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    Aw why thank you I am very happy to see someone that really likes my work and see the meaning behind it. Thank you!
    Nah , don't mention it dark angle.I was just happy to see that the poem section is getting alive again.
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Nah , don't mention it dark angle.I was just happy to see that the poem section is getting alive again.
    Yeah, I know there are some good poems on here I just like writing poems that are about love and come from my heart.

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    eah, I know there are some good poems on here I just like writing poems that are about love and come from my heart.
    Yah the same here, I like to write poems in my heart's content.I also like to write love poems
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: How I Feel Around You

    I love your poem. i think that it is beautiful. I am happy to say that this is the best poem that i have ever read. Great job. Make MORE!!
    I AM WHO I AM SO IF YOU DONT LIKE IT KISS MY A$$! lol

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