This poem was long. Which means first and foremost you get kudos for the effort it took to write it.
But, with long poems you have to be careful. You have to keep it interesting without it being too scattered and random after a while.
That seemed to be the case here (in my opinion). It went from a chase in the forrest, to an encounter with an environmentally concious "nature beast". Suddenly theres a request to find a fairy? .... Then it just.... ends.
As interesting as the story was it was kinda scattered and random.
Once again though, I applaud the time it must have taken to write this... kudos