Great poem indeed, i liked it and its like what my brother writes
Well...Sarlinari pretty much summed up the problems with it. lol The meaning behind it indeed is very touching.
Great poem indeed, i liked it and its like what my brother writes
"Praise Inu-Yasha"
You are limited to having 4 lines of text in your signature. This includes blank lines. -- Hassun
awesome poem and its full if regrets and dispair just like
life cna be . keep the faith and somone will come along dont wait for somone
who thinks your gonna be a back gf/bf for them there just a waist of time
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
It's a good poem. However, to me, it didn't flow together very well.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
IMO its a decent poem. Could be more clear and have a better flow. Good effort nontheless![]()
very good poem princess tell your cousin it was very well thoughtr out an put down fav part...ALL of it ^__^ keep it up?![]()
(-)4(|< 7(-)3 P14|\|37
it seems like i remember some of the lyrics from an Nsync song. it's good anyway.
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
SIS!!! I dont care who wrote it! I LOVE IT!!! *hugs*
♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
Bookmarks