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    Re: hurt

    Well...Sarlinari pretty much summed up the problems with it. lol The meaning behind it indeed is very touching.

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    Re: hurt

    Great poem indeed, i liked it and its like what my brother writes
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    Re: hurt

    awesome poem and its full if regrets and dispair just like
    life cna be . keep the faith and somone will come along dont wait for somone
    who thinks your gonna be a back gf/bf for them there just a waist of time
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: hurt

    It's a good poem. However, to me, it didn't flow together very well.

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    IMO its a decent poem. Could be more clear and have a better flow. Good effort nontheless

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    Re: hurt

    very good poem princess tell your cousin it was very well thoughtr out an put down fav part...ALL of it ^__^ keep it up?
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    Re: hurt

    it seems like i remember some of the lyrics from an Nsync song. it's good anyway.

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    SIS!!! I dont care who wrote it! I LOVE IT!!! *hugs*
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