Thread: Hurt

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

I hold myself telling me everything is going to be alright
But thats how I got thrown out the night

I slowly glaze at you but you turn away from me
I try to hug you but you throw me back as you replied let me be

There I felt thousands of knifes right behind me to start
As there they aim here for my heart

I cry on your knees
As I try to beg for please

But you just annoyed me
As I thought you were that special key

I reach out for you so I can see the our future together forever
But you left me like you were so clever

Now my heart feels like it's burning in to ashes as it flew above
So there on I found out I should of never love

I didn't like it but I'll get use to it. I thought I sounded a bit too emo. Oh well whats done is done.

Many girl here seem so sad. maybe they just need pocket lint to save there day
The writing was very nice. good sound. and was good to see the smiles at the bottom. so now I now your a happy person. even if the poem is sad.

I like emotional and I am a guy,even more supprising I'm not gay or metrosexual as posted in my introduction of myself to this site. That poem was awsome though.

I thank you both for your comment! I hate being sad cause it causes millions of problems so I always try to stay happy and support a friend. I'll never frown again. But I thank you both very much

A nice poem, very sad and makes me think about my future a lot...
It makes me smile when I see people as optimistic as you, even though they have sad feelings in them also (as this poem shows)... and it makes me too try to be always happy.
I really hope to see your other works, for this one is very good!

I thank you a lot for you comment Lasura! I'm very glad to hear from you!