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Oct 19, 2007, 08:04 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  | hurt Do you remember All those hugs and kisses? We had something special And now... It's like that something Dissapear into thin Air. You left me crying In the dark And you stoped talking After we feel appart. I don't know what happened, And noone can tell me. Have I lost you forever? Will you come back to me Like you did many times before? Or will you stay with her This time? You look happy togetherbut... It hurts to see you like that. Maybe i smile but... I feel like a broken mirror. guys i was upset when i wrote the poem so don't ask why
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Oct 20, 2007, 02:45 PM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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 Credits: 59,118 | Re: hurt Oh my.. :/ sheesh... Hmm did not know you wrote poems.. @.@ not a bad one this one..nicely done.. keep up the good work  |
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Oct 21, 2007, 06:22 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough | Re: hurt Quote:
 i was upset so i just worte was i had on my mind,i know it's not to good
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Oct 21, 2007, 09:07 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._.
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Credits: 6,397 |  Re: hurt  nice poem I don't really know what to say... I like your idea, You really do sound hurt here...have a chocolate cream ice-cream with a cherry on the top ^_^  p.s...i don't like cherries :P ^_^ put on a smile ^_^ Keep on writing more poems  -Zainab
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Oct 21, 2007, 09:48 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough | Re: hurt Quote:
but thanks for the ice-cream^^ i'm trying to put a smile on my face so people will stop asking me what's wrong thanks sis 
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