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    hurt

    Do you remember
    All those hugs and kisses?
    We had something special
    And now...
    It's like that something
    Dissapear into thin
    Air.
    You left me crying
    In the dark
    And you stoped talking
    After we feel appart.
    I don't know what happened,
    And noone can tell me.
    Have I lost you forever?
    Will you come back to me
    Like you did many times before?
    Or will you stay with her
    This time?
    You look happy togetherbut...
    It hurts to see you like that.
    Maybe i smile but...
    I feel like a broken mirror.
    guys i was upset when i wrote the poem so don't ask why

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    Re: hurt

    Oh my.. :/ sheesh...

    Hmm did not know you wrote poems.. @.@ not a bad one this one..nicely done.. keep up the good work

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    Re: hurt

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Oh my.. :/ sheesh...

    Hmm did not know you wrote poems.. @.@ not a bad one this one..nicely done.. keep up the good work
    thanks Ray
    i was upset so i just worte was i had on my mind,i know it's not to good

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    nice poem

    I don't really know what to say...

    I like your idea, You really do sound hurt
    here...have a chocolate cream ice-cream with a cherry on the top ^_^

    p.s...i don't like cherries :P

    ^_^ put on a smile ^_^

    Keep on writing more poems

    -Zainab

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    Re: hurt

    Quote Originally Posted by ihauntforlust View Post
    nice poem

    I don't really know what to say...

    I like your idea, You really do sound hurt
    here...have a chocolate cream ice-cream with a cherry on the top ^_^

    p.s...i don't like cherries :P

    ^_^ put on a smile ^_^

    Keep on writing more poems

    -Zainab
    i was hurt and i'm still hurt*sighs*
    but thanks for the ice-cream^^
    i'm trying to put a smile on my face so people will stop asking me what's wrong
    thanks sis

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