I'm walking away
Leaving you behind
My heart's been broken
For the last time
All the things we've been through
The lies you've told
The pain you put me through
I'm sorry but this is something i cannot go through with
Save your kisses for another
Save your tears because I know you don't care
I loved you once but technically
You were never there
You were with her
Your other love
And what you did
Is something i can never forgive
I can't love you the same way
As i did way back then
So I'll leave you
Before i get hurt again
that was really good. Lots of emotion
the flow was ok and it seamed like you were trying to rhyme
some of the lines but it kinda got messed up. idk.
but it was still really good. keep up the good work.
lol.. yeah.. i was trying to rhyme while writting this... but in the end i just wrote it how I felt.. Thank You.
awww sooo much emotion jamie hunny are u ok?
its a really nice poem and it was lovely to read i hope you are/will be alright ^^
.... yeah... i'm alright... I think .. -sighs- I dunno. I love someone yet it's not the same as it used to be and i can't forgive him for what he did to me.. It's tearing me apart and i guess it shows... Anyway.. that stuff is for my blog.. I'm glad that you guys can feel the emotion i put into this.. ^^ Im sure i'll be fine Equinn.. thanks for your concern.