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    Hurt

    Hurt

    I'm walking away
    Leaving you behind
    My heart's been broken
    For the last time

    All the things we've been through
    The lies you've told
    The pain you put me through
    I'm sorry but this is something i cannot go through with

    Save your kisses for another
    Save your tears because I know you don't care
    I loved you once but technically
    You were never there

    You were with her
    Your other love
    And what you did
    Is something i can never forgive

    I can't love you the same way
    As i did way back then
    So I'll leave you
    Before i get hurt again
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Hurt

    that was really good. Lots of emotion
    the flow was ok and it seamed like you were trying to rhyme
    some of the lines but it kinda got messed up. idk.

    but it was still really good. keep up the good work.

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    Re: Hurt

    lol.. yeah.. i was trying to rhyme while writting this... but in the end i just wrote it how I felt.. Thank You.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Hurt

    awww sooo much emotion jamie hunny are u ok?

    its a really nice poem and it was lovely to read i hope you are/will be alright ^^

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    Re: Hurt

    .... yeah... i'm alright... I think .. -sighs- I dunno. I love someone yet it's not the same as it used to be and i can't forgive him for what he did to me.. It's tearing me apart and i guess it shows... Anyway.. that stuff is for my blog.. I'm glad that you guys can feel the emotion i put into this.. ^^ Im sure i'll be fine Equinn.. thanks for your concern.
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    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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