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    Hurt ='(...MY LIFE STORY...

    I bursted into tears in Science class, i had to be excused i wrote this for my personal problems.


    ************************************************** ************

    My life is a story,
    once begun it was told.
    As I stood there watching,
    so little and cold.

    It was a twist,
    at the age of 9.
    The story was turning,
    I started to lie

    Some say i'm not normal,
    other say im weird.
    It was at that point..it didn't matter
    I just burst into tears.

    One person was right
    you truly have NO friends.
    at a chance you get to look back,
    you'll realize it was all pretend.

    No people can see,
    the only true you.
    They can only see
    the tears and your face pale blue.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Hurt ='(...MY LIFE STORY...

    Aww that's beautiful and sad....But I kindahave gone through something sad too so if you feel like talking then sure just PM me*Gives you a big hug*.-^__^-

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    Re: Hurt ='(...MY LIFE STORY...

    wow...that' amazing. I like it. It reminds me of this quote I wrote some years back "I cry, I bleed, I hurt...doesn't that make me human? If it does than why am I treated like I'm not? because I'm differnt, weird...well what's normal anyway?I don't know what normal is...all I know is that it's not me."

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Re: Hurt ='(...MY LIFE STORY...

    I liked your poem. It kinda reminded me of my past. Eventualy the hurt will stop. Even after the fact you may feel as if no one could possibly understand you. That is just it, no one could possibly understand you completely unless you build a fully developed trust with them. I am sure everyone feels like this at times. If you would like to talk more you can pm me k

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    Thank you to all of you. I know that people go through this so i wrte it down. and sure ^^

    I thank you for your comments
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Hurt ='(...MY LIFE STORY...

    I just want to tell you that I love your poem. For you to burst into tears in class…it must have really affected you. I’m only a PM away if you want to talk.

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