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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    Hehe nice poem ^_^ Keep them comming

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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    I really love this poem it has flow and emtions are in it... even though u may not be able to tell i an see u really tryed to get a flow going. I don't think u got the flow u was looking for but i think its more of a natural flow
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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    haha, uh...... i can kinda relate.LOL. But overall it was pretty humerous and entertaining. I'd comment more... but I'm too tired, lol.

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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    Hmm, it seems really simple and funny at the start, but actually there might be a deeper meaning that you didnt intend to put in there....... hey, and it even has a moral to the story. I think the poem seems to be about "being a better person"

    Anyway, deeper meaning or not, I really enjoyed it. It was very unique, and flowed really well with the help of the rhyme. Awesome piece ^_^
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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    well, tis is an interesting piece... i never seen anything like tis before...so tbh im nt really a fan of these kind of poems when im down but it sure is nc when ur hyped so i'll rate it a 7/10(sry..my standards r high)

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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    Quote Originally Posted by Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me
    If your into poems that have a deeper meaning them your advised to read no further XD Enjoy the randomness! (I know it doesn't have a frequent rhyming pattern! >.<)

    Cuddles for the outcast,
    Hugs for the weird,
    Shake hands with the idiot,
    Who's just grown a beard.

    Watch out for the Hobo,
    Or your moneys gonna go-go,
    Laughing at the old man,
    Experimenting with fake tan.

    Be polite to the large women,
    'Else you will be dead by ten,
    Pokes for the lazy guys,
    You just got the evil eyes!


    Haha well I thought it was amusing....


    That poem has really cheered me up! i love randomness things and i am no good at writing weird stuff!! i liked it where some parts rhymed.
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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    this poem is interesting to me i like dark poetry and saw some in here like at the end it was funny too though ill give u ur props :P XD

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    Re: *Hyper poem*

    Hahaha, cute. Its well written and I like it.
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