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Reply With Quotethats deep......................
I always loved you best, but you said nothing If you could tame me
Break me so that all I saw was you
Make my tears no more than
Just dust, a drought that will never end
Force me to jump through a ring of fire
Would you?
If you knew all along
That I would fulfill any desire
Any command put forth by you
Forfeit my life
If you knew
Your capability
To domesticate me
Would you?
If you thought it was best to euphemize me
Put me out of my deranged reality
That your all I could ever want
Could you?
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
thats deep......................
nice peom
is that for someone?if it is you must really love that person
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Lovey dovey poem. I much like it. Thanks for giving me the honor to read it. hehe.
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Ah? Didn't quite understand it, when I first read, but after reading and breaking stanzes into sentences, it makes clear sense to me now. Don't mind me, I don't have a poetic, poem-interpreting mind, so it took me a while. Anyway! As I always say, I love, love poems, and this one, I like very much! Well written. Keep it up, and share some more please.
-Kedar-
that was pretty sweet nympho, keep it up.
That's a sweet poem Nympho and deep too.
that is really good deep but good
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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