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    Unhappy I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    If you could tame me
    Break me so that all I saw was you
    Make my tears no more than
    Just dust, a drought that will never end
    Force me to jump through a ring of fire
    Would you?
    If you knew all along
    That I would fulfill any desire
    Any command put forth by you
    Forfeit my life
    If you knew
    Your capability
    To domesticate me
    Would you?
    If you thought it was best to euphemize me
    Put me out of my deranged reality
    That your all I could ever want
    Could you?

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    thats deep......................

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    nice peom
    is that for someone?if it is you must really love that person
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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    Lovey dovey poem. I much like it. Thanks for giving me the honor to read it. hehe.

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    Ah? Didn't quite understand it, when I first read, but after reading and breaking stanzes into sentences, it makes clear sense to me now. Don't mind me, I don't have a poetic, poem-interpreting mind, so it took me a while. Anyway! As I always say, I love, love poems, and this one, I like very much! Well written. Keep it up, and share some more please.

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    that was pretty sweet nympho, keep it up.

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    That's a sweet poem Nympho and deep too.

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    Re: I always loved you best, but you said nothing

    that is really good deep but good

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