I am

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 13, 2006, 08:03 PM

I am what no one would ever dare,
to even mention,
to even remember,
by own intention.

I am the shadow of what i used to be,
that thing that can't even breathe,
that thing that doesn't lives,
i am the memorie of a painful life,
filled with tears and fights.

You wouldn't want to know me,
if someone ever recalls me,
it for shame, sorrow,
or because they need someone to blame,
when they remember the pain,
that my dead reflextion contains.

I am what someone would deny,
or even hide,
that once came to life,
and tragicaly died.
Filled with hatred,
and a hollow soul,
that once wished that it's heart,
wouldn't beat anymore.

So i bleed,
and i bleed,
till i breathe no more.
My existence is not a real fact anymore,
now i'm just a memorie of the life of a cold core.

BlueFox1 · Sep 13, 2006, 09:41 PM

Man this poem just comes to life on it's own, every line, every stanza has emotion so you can feel what the writer is feeling! Very well written and keep up the good work! I be sure to look for more of you work!

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 13, 2006, 09:44 PM

Shiaaa!!! awesome work! this is the best of all ya poemz. I know that this one is the one that expresses one of your mind's darkest places... It rulez! keep it up!
I can't wait to read another one of ya dark side xD

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 13, 2006, 09:56 PM

thanks to the both of u. i'm glad u liked it. ^-^ i appreciate it, i really do.

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 13, 2006, 10:02 PM

no problemz! suu. Ya know i digg ya poemz! hahaha, they are all i cannot say in public, though i know neither do yaz! xD
see ya @ 2 a.m. shia! we gonna chillazin right?

*Rave_Grip* · Sep 13, 2006, 10:14 PM

Wow ... really dark poem ... keep itup Shia ^-^

Sep 13, 2006, 08:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	I am I am what no one would ever dare, to even mention, to even remember, by own intention. I am the shadow of what i used to be, that thing that can't even breathe, that thing that doesn't lives, i am the memorie of a painful life, filled with tears and fights. You wouldn't want to know me, if someone ever recalls me, it for shame, sorrow, or because they need someone to blame, when they remember the pain, that my dead reflextion contains. I am what someone would deny, or even hide, that once came to life, and tragicaly died. Filled with hatred, and a hollow soul, that once wished that it's heart, wouldn't beat anymore. So i bleed, and i bleed, till i breathe no more. My existence is not a real fact anymore, now i'm just a memorie of the life of a cold core. __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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Sep 13, 2006, 09:41 PM	#2 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: I am Man this poem just comes to life on it's own, every line, every stanza has emotion so you can feel what the writer is feeling! Very well written and keep up the good work! I be sure to look for more of you work! __________________
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Sep 13, 2006, 09:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: somewhere chillazin with KuRuMi ^.^ Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: I am Shiaaa!!! awesome work! this is the best of all ya poemz. I know that this one is the one that expresses one of your mind's darkest places... It rulez! keep it up! I can't wait to read another one of ya dark side xD __________________ I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need... I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems! Colorful stylez
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: I am thanks to the both of u. i'm glad u liked it. ^-^ i appreciate it, i really do. __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: somewhere chillazin with KuRuMi ^.^ Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: I am no problemz! suu. Ya know i digg ya poemz! hahaha, they are all i cannot say in public, though i know neither do yaz! xD see ya @ 2 a.m. shia! we gonna chillazin right? __________________ I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need... I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems! Colorful stylez
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Sep 13, 2006, 10:14 PM	#6 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,832	Re: I am Wow ... really dark poem ... keep itup Shia ^-^ __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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