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    I am


    I am what no one would ever dare,
    to even mention,
    to even remember,
    by own intention.

    I am the shadow of what i used to be,
    that thing that can't even breathe,
    that thing that doesn't lives,
    i am the memorie of a painful life,
    filled with tears and fights.

    You wouldn't want to know me,
    if someone ever recalls me,
    it for shame, sorrow,
    or because they need someone to blame,
    when they remember the pain,
    that my dead reflextion contains.

    I am what someone would deny,
    or even hide,
    that once came to life,
    and tragicaly died.
    Filled with hatred,
    and a hollow soul,
    that once wished that it's heart,
    wouldn't beat anymore.

    So i bleed,
    and i bleed,
    till i breathe no more.
    My existence is not a real fact anymore,
    now i'm just a memorie of the life of a cold core.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: I am

    Man this poem just comes to life on it's own, every line, every stanza has emotion so you can feel what the writer is feeling! Very well written and keep up the good work! I be sure to look for more of you work!

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    Re: I am

    Shiaaa!!! awesome work! this is the best of all ya poemz. I know that this one is the one that expresses one of your mind's darkest places... It rulez! keep it up!
    I can't wait to read another one of ya dark side xD
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
    Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
    Colorful stylez

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    Re: I am

    thanks to the both of u. i'm glad u liked it. ^-^ i appreciate it, i really do.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    no problemz! suu. Ya know i digg ya poemz! hahaha, they are all i cannot say in public, though i know neither do yaz! xD
    see ya @ 2 a.m. shia! we gonna chillazin right?
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
    Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
    Colorful stylez

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    Re: I am

    Wow ... really dark poem ... keep itup Shia ^-^

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