I qouted my favorite lines. I don't know why but they just stood out to me. I like the poem in general. I like the ending too where you state that you are compassion too. Your rhyming is pretty good also.It is me who burns your eyes before tears arrive,
Just to remind you you're still alive.
I reassure you in darkness, though I cannot be the light.I can't wait to read more.


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