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    I am

    In his presence, I am what makes you shake.
    The reality in all that is fake.
    I can be your savior, I can be your demise.
    I'm the truth behind the lies.
    I am why your insomniatic mind stays awake.
    I refreash each breath you take.
    It is me who burns your eyes before tears arrive,
    Just to remind you you're still alive.
    I reassure you in darkness, though I cannot be the light.
    I don't make it easy, I need you to fight.
    Even though another has caused you strife.
    I'll make you want to save his life.
    I run deep so I should be rationed.
    I am none other than compassion.
    So who is driving you to want to hold his hand?
    I am. I am. I am. I am.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I am

    It is me who burns your eyes before tears arrive,
    Just to remind you you're still alive.
    I reassure you in darkness, though I cannot be the light.
    I qouted my favorite lines. I don't know why but they just stood out to me. I like the poem in general. I like the ending too where you state that you are compassion too. Your rhyming is pretty good also. I can't wait to read more.

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: I am

    Great poem it was mysterious and dark. I liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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