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Old Feb 11, 2007, 03:02 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I am

In his presence, I am what makes you shake.
The reality in all that is fake.
I can be your savior, I can be your demise.
I'm the truth behind the lies.
I am why your insomniatic mind stays awake.
I refreash each breath you take.
It is me who burns your eyes before tears arrive,
Just to remind you you're still alive.
I reassure you in darkness, though I cannot be the light.
I don't make it easy, I need you to fight.
Even though another has caused you strife.
I'll make you want to save his life.
I run deep so I should be rationed.
I am none other than compassion.
So who is driving you to want to hold his hand?
I am. I am. I am. I am.
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Old Feb 11, 2007, 12:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It is me who burns your eyes before tears arrive,
Just to remind you you're still alive.
I reassure you in darkness, though I cannot be the light.
I qouted my favorite lines. I don't know why but they just stood out to me. I like the poem in general. I like the ending too where you state that you are compassion too. Your rhyming is pretty good also. I can't wait to read more.
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Old Feb 11, 2007, 03:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Great poem it was mysterious and dark. I liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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