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    "As I am"

    I cant find a way to make it go away,
    Are there certain things that I have to do,
    For it to go away?

    I cry and cry for hell knows why,
    Not able to stop,
    Even though I try.

    I dont understand why I have to be cursed,
    Is there something that I did to deserve this,
    Its a damnable thirst.

    I think its time to go away,
    Putting the gun to my head,
    Show me the way.

    And upon the cold grey stone,
    That marked the grave,
    It read:

    As you standing there are...
    ... I once was.

    As I am lying here now...
    ... you one day will be.

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    Re: "As I am"

    Oh wow I like alot like your other one. they are all good.

    And the rhyming in this one went well.

    I like it lots keep it up.^.^

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    Re: "As I am"

    Hmm.. wow... thats deep.. @.@ :/ this one is about death right? if im not mistaken... good job again keep up the good work ^^
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    Re: "As I am"

    That was really good I like the rhyme pattern in the poem you did a very good job but also very deep keep up the good work can't wait to hear more!!

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    Re: "As I am"

    wow I absolutely loved it! I like most of your poems you make! this is such a good poem nice strong emotions good job!



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