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    **I wrote this at random. No thought process, no planning; just good ol' spontenaety. I hope you all like it. This is kind of experimental. **

    I am darkness.
    Watch me fade away.

    I am a trickster.
    Can you come out to play?

    I am truth.
    I'll hurt you without fists.

    I am intelligence.
    To hell with so-called bliss.

    I am hunger.
    I am never satisfied.

    I am thirst,
    quenched by a sense of pride.

    I am madness.
    Crazy is as crazy does.

    I am fury.
    Anger fits like a glove.

    I am love.
    Passion gives us all life.

    I am hatred.
    Never leave without a knife.

    I am lust.
    Opposite gender is my prey.

    I am finished.
    No more writing for today.


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    Re: I am...

    Nice poem:very good rhyme scheme and the structure is beautiful. Man! who am I kidding I don't really no much about that sort of thing but the poem is very good I would expect that from a professional poet laureat.

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    Ha, ha! I like this! U never cease ta amaze me atomik. Incredible work, man, keep up the good work.

    Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage

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    I really like this one, I think that this is definitely is one of your best ones you've written!!

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    Mathematical!! Bugz Champion, Ant Bully Champion, Chainsaw the childern Champion, 3D Net Blazer Champion, Cricket Challenge Champion, Big Uglies Champion, Body Check Champion, Desktop Fishing Champion, All Star Skate Park Champion, Chuckie Egg Champion, Birdy Champion, Anthrax Jelly Champion, Air Typer Champion, Word Pads Champion, Crash Test Dummy Curling Champion, The Mini Jump Game Champion, Chairlift Challenge Champion, Astroboy vs One Bad Storm Champion, Fight Man Champion, Blot In Hell Champion, Beeku Adventure Champion, Connect2 Champion, Atomica Champion, Cannonball Follies 2 Champion, Bada Boing Champion, BeachDefence Champion, Alkie Kong 2 Champion atomik_sprout has become well known atomik_sprout has become well known atomik_sprout has become well known atomik_sprout's Avatar
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    Re: I am...

    Quote Originally Posted by Alondra View Post
    I really like this one, I think that this is definitely is one of your best ones you've written!!

    Thanks Alondra, but I doubt that you can say this is the best one I've written, when i've posted about fifty poems or so before you joined, LOL.


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