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    I am 4101

    As of now we are numbers,
    just a figure on paper,
    whats the use of a name
    when prenonexistient?
    they never used their name,
    they never spoke out,
    there were many times,
    they were all given the chance,
    they never fought it,
    they lost their names,
    were given numbers,
    and just like that,
    all hope was gone,
    here I am telling you,
    as the number 4101

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    Re: I am 4101

    Holy mind f*ck. That was trippy, there was an angry tone to it... and it had a matrix, 12 monkeys kind of feel to it. Like this poem was written by someone from the future who was pissed that no one did anything to prevent us all becoming nameless digits. Can I be 7-420?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I am 4101

    OH WOW!!
    that was really good Conrad and wow
    there was anger and wow
    and almost something like regret. i dont know but it was good
    and the short sentences made it flow nicely
    good work. ^_^

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    Well I guess that its a good thing that you all can feel the emotion of my work, I guess that was the point, and yes peach follows you can be 7-420

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    Re: I am 4101

    Woah, great work..kid. Intense. Keep it up.

    Nameless digits.

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