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Reply With Quotei really like this ^^ it has a good flow and feeling to it. ^^ very well done Kudo's! ^^ I think you should have the "i am" just a little cheerd up. just think itd make it not so sad =( but the whole how he's the opposite is sweet (like cute)
Google translate handles the Japanese -> English translation worse than the English -> Japanese translation so I hope that you're not basing the quality based on that.
i really like this ^^ it has a good flow and feeling to it. ^^ very well done Kudo's! ^^ I think you should have the "i am" just a little cheerd up. just think itd make it not so sad =( but the whole how he's the opposite is sweet (like cute)
Last edited by mezzo1991; May 24, 2010 at 06:39 AM. Reason: wasnt done xD
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animefreak150 (Jun 03, 2010)
Nice poem, i really liked it...i'm sure you'll be awsome one day.
animefreak150 (Jun 03, 2010)
aww thanks mezzo~~ but this poem is supposed to be sad... considering its dedicated to my friend i really liked. and thank u 2 MirrorKnight~~ i might not be awsome in the future but im sure i can continue writing and improve~~
the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,
that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...
Re: i am... that's a lovely poemand please add me
and i hope to read another poem from u soon
im angel but, i could be dark and mysterious at times , so boys watch out meow im fast and mean!
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