Good poem dude, but the wrong kind of "buy". It would also be better if you use better punctuation. I don't like long good-byes either!Hope to hear more poems from ya and hopefully it doesn't take as long.
Its been a while since we have
talked , no long good buys or
hellos , non of the dramatic pause
that come with just walking away.
Who knew that with every time
i left it became easier to not care
about your feeling's , So I'm here now
back to where i know i belong being so blind.
Troubles have always been there and i always
kept them away from you for the fact you might
not be able to handle what has followed me yet
again , i stand here sighing as my burden feels
lifted seeing how receptive you are of me.
I always travel here and there never staying
on one trail or road because staying to long
on one path can get you more lost than a
path less traveled , i know you don't understand
what i say but put simply i only want space
tempered with solitude.
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Its a good bye with out words , a feeling of
being there with out even even being near it at all
confusion is what this poem is about its something
different from a point of view that only those who leave
can understand, though its not right when it happens.
and with how random i was with the wording or tried
to be i was trying to make it sound like an explanation
from some one who was not sure of what to say but wanted
to be accpted after leaving for so long.
it has been a while since i have posted becuase of this and that
so comments and suggestions are still welcomed .
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Good poem dude, but the wrong kind of "buy". It would also be better if you use better punctuation. I don't like long good-byes either!Hope to hear more poems from ya and hopefully it doesn't take as long.
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Great poem for it to be the first one you've posted in a while. It puts me in the mind of a guy who loves a girl and really wants to be with her,but the open road is calling him to leave her so he can explore the world to see what else is out there. I'm glad you're back.
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