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    I am the Fallen Angel

    I am a fallen angel
    The earth is my home
    I went away from the light
    Because I preferred the comfort
    Of the shadows and the night

    I am not evil
    Though I am not considered good
    Yet all are told to fear me
    But I am just misunderstood
    Just because I am draped in black
    And I no longer have white wings
    Sprouting from my back
    I am forever destined to remain alone
    Ostracized by god-fearers
    In my new, mortal home

    I am still immortal
    For it is said my punishment is to watch
    While the rest of the world suffers
    And all the plans of do-gooders are botched
    I can never lend a hand
    To fight for what is right
    Or try to save the day
    I am ousted from the flock
    Though I am more or less the same

    Each of you are tainted at birth
    Yet you go through great pains
    To remove the mark
    Baptism is quite a holy shower
    But you never lose the scars
    Don’t get me wrong
    I think it’s a wonderful thing
    To try to save your souls
    From the eternal chaos
    Living in sin can bring

    But I am just a reminder
    Of how black and white things are
    There is no in between gray
    For someone who dislikes the golden harmony
    Yet still believes in God
    I am not a sinner
    In my mind, I believe I am pure
    Yet to all I have some terrible disease
    Of which there is no cure

    I am just a fallen angel
    Yet by my choice I did fall
    And if I had the chance to change my fate
    I’m not sure if I could make the call

    You may think of me as anathema
    You may shield your child’s eyes
    You may hope you never become like me
    Some might… I wouldn’t be surprised
    But you still would be the minority
    And that’s the golden and designated truth
    For if you were to go against any teachings
    You would be named a traitor, a heathen, and uncouth

    I am still alive, still breathing
    This judgment is not so bad
    I do not wish to know what the future brings
    But for now, despite it all, I am glad
    I am free to hide in shadows
    For it’s been requested I remain unseen
    I answer to no one but myself
    And I choose what I believe

    Some may look at me despairing
    Shaking their heads at the sight
    Thinking me ignorant and a failure
    That I am nothing more than a blight
    But I have grown accustomed to the whispers
    I no longer shudder at the stares
    Yet I would give my life to save someone
    If I could… but I cannot…
    Because I’m not supposed to care

    I am evil
    I’m a demon
    I should be tortured and defiled
    I am darkness
    I am shadow
    Yet I too cringe when someone hurts a child
    Think of me how you wish
    I can live with your hate
    But I am no longer a prisoner
    Behind those pearly gates

    <O: comments, this is also on one of my photo's>

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    very awesome poem and i like the dark angel theme
    it really shows how you can feel difrent when it comes ti thinking your meant to be alone when there is no one for you, love is wierd like that but
    love does have a way of turning those blakc wings white again
    when the right guy comes along.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    That is such a great poem. It makes you think it's happening to you. I felt alot of emotion from it. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your poems.

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    wow this peom is vary interesting how long does it take you to think up peoms like this
    being a bunny is hard work

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    This is an awesome poem, I love it.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very awesome poem and i like the dark angel theme
    it really shows how you can feel difrent when it comes ti thinking your meant to be alone when there is no one for you, love is wierd like that but
    love does have a way of turning those blakc wings white again
    when the right guy comes along.
    Yes, percisely, although it can also turn your white wings black at the same time, if you are not careful. Thanks for the comment!
    Quote Originally Posted by CherryBlossom18 View Post
    That is such a great poem. It makes you think it's happening to you. I felt alot of emotion from it. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
    Thank you for your comment and yeah i did try to put alot of emotion in it.
    Quote Originally Posted by anime_fantasy View Post
    wow this peom is vary interesting how long does it take you to think up peoms like this
    Not too long, depends on where the idea comes from
    Quote Originally Posted by fma1012 View Post
    This is an awesome poem, I love it.
    Thank you for your comment.

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    It's long, but every phrases brings life for every part...
    I like the way you wrote it... Honestly...

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    Great imagery, and theme! I like this poem and how you expressed yourself! Awesome job!

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