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    As I Am Inside The Looking Glass

    Fading in to a disarray
    Becoming more mentally ill
    I’m drifting farther away
    While losing my power of will

    I’ve become lost inside my mind
    Feeling so empty and cold
    For my thoughts were never kind
    And my mind seems to grow old

    Staring in to the looking glass
    The image I see can’t be me
    For she’s of another class
    She seems more distant to be

    Those eyes are becoming more dull
    And her skin becomes paler
    She looks as if she’s ready to fall
    To life’s reality she is a failure

    How can this be my reflection?
    I’m just another contradiction

    I don’t feel real
    Maybe I’m nonexistent
    I can’t even feel
    But my heart is consistent

    I’m just another whisper in the wind
    Leave me alone within my fear
    Kill me now for I have sinned
    Darkness seems to surround me here

    What the hell is wrong with me?
    For I’ve become more distant to be

    Nothing but a lonesome case
    The darkness is consuming
    Lost inside this dreadful place
    These thoughts are overwhelming

    No one hears me screaming
    Nor do they understand my pain
    Don’t even see my soul leaving
    While the thoughts drive me insane

    The air is becoming dense
    I’m fading into the dismay
    Dieing here in this silence
    No one noticed me anyway…



    This is probably one of my more saddening poems.. I haven't been this depressed in awhile. I suppose that could be because I'm constant..
    Well I hope you enjoy.. tell me what you think.

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    Re: ..As I Am Inside The Looking Glass...

    It was a sad poem,but it sounded like a cry for help from someone. I liked the poem and look forward to reading more.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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