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    I Am A Liar!!

    I love you and always will
    your the everything i need,
    when i hurt your my pain , when i
    am happy your my tears , i cant live without
    you.

    Everything you say sounds so
    believable , i want to be with you
    always , and have the moon as our light
    as we hold each other tight , i will always
    love you , your the rock that i stand on.


    All the lies that i tell her the sweet
    nothings that she takes and believes
    them as truth , your my one and only
    no one else can even compare do you
    believe me?

    He thinks of me as an angel he
    hold me late at night ,if nothing
    else is certain I'm know his love will
    always hold me tight.

    I know you have had a hard time and everyone
    is against you , but don't worry baby i am there for
    you always , i can tell you anything because i know you
    so well , you let your dreams and hopes slip so easily
    from your lips.


    I trust him completely he knows my every need
    he is the answer to my prayers , while the world is
    against me he is beside he really does love me , and
    loves how i am , oh how i wish i could have met him
    before now.

    Your dreams are with me and here is a rose as
    a promice to you that you will always be mine ,
    how far should go my lies keep getting better
    because i am a liar HA HA , i fooled you so much
    with empty dreams and promices.


    I lie to your face and dont blink an eye why are
    you ignorant , cant you see that i am a liar? , i dash
    your dreams and fill full of false hope i am liar , and if you
    stay with me forever i will keep lieing to you i promice HA HA.
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    this poem is about liars and how some of them hurt others just for
    a game , any comments or sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Am A Liar!!

    Oh wow I loved this.
    I can relate to it too soo well.

    Wow the emotions the way its all written is just like wow.

    I thought it was really good.
    Keep it up HODC.Cant wait to see more.

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    YOU READ MY MIND!!!! oh sorry.. it's just you wrote about someone i know.. . except that he is still keeping up those lies...

    I love your poem and it was written well. i like how you went back and forth...

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    Re: I Am A Liar!!

    very good holder very very good it showed alot of emotions and feelings cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: I Am A Liar!!

    Very sweet poem it almost made me cry. It's so wonderful when you find someone to love you like that. It's unfortunate that alot of people will tell you things like this making you believe it knowing all along their lying to you. I think it's why people's hearts get broken so often cause of lies like that.
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    Re: I Am A Liar!!

    i agree with Cherry... sweet... descriptive... ^^ i like it...another chris's materpiece..

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    Re: I Am A Liar!!

    Very nice poem! I can relate to it very very well! Nice description as well! Keep up the good work!!^^



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