Oh wow I loved this.
I can relate to it too soo well.
Wow the emotions the way its all written is just like wow.
I thought it was really good.
Keep it up HODC.Cant wait to see more.
I love you and always will
your the everything i need,
when i hurt your my pain , when i
am happy your my tears , i cant live without
Everything you say sounds so
believable , i want to be with you
always , and have the moon as our light
as we hold each other tight , i will always
love you , your the rock that i stand on.
All the lies that i tell her the sweet
nothings that she takes and believes
them as truth , your my one and only
no one else can even compare do you
He thinks of me as an angel he
hold me late at night ,if nothing
else is certain I'm know his love will
always hold me tight.
I know you have had a hard time and everyone
is against you , but don't worry baby i am there for
you always , i can tell you anything because i know you
so well , you let your dreams and hopes slip so easily
from your lips.
I trust him completely he knows my every need
he is the answer to my prayers , while the world is
against me he is beside he really does love me , and
loves how i am , oh how i wish i could have met him
Your dreams are with me and here is a rose as
a promice to you that you will always be mine ,
how far should go my lies keep getting better
because i am a liar HA HA , i fooled you so much
with empty dreams and promices.
I lie to your face and dont blink an eye why are
you ignorant , cant you see that i am a liar? , i dash
your dreams and fill full of false hope i am liar , and if you
stay with me forever i will keep lieing to you i promice HA HA.
this poem is about liars and how some of them hurt others just for
a game , any comments or sugestions are welcomed
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
YOU READ MY MIND!!!! oh sorry.. it's just you wrote about someone i know.. . except that he is still keeping up those lies...
I love your poem and it was written well. i like how you went back and forth...
very good holder very very good it showed alot of emotions and feelings cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!
Very sweet poem it almost made me cry. It's so wonderful when you find someone to love you like that. It's unfortunate that alot of people will tell you things like this making you believe it knowing all along their lying to you. I think it's why people's hearts get broken so often cause of lies like that.
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i agree with Cherry... sweet... descriptive... ^^ i like it...another chris's materpiece..
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