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    *I am me*

    There will not ever be anyone like me.
    I am special because I am unique.
    I am stardust and dreams.
    I am light.
    I am love and hope.
    I am hugs and sometimes tears.
    I am the words "I love you".
    I am swirls of blue, gree, red, yellow, purple, orange, and the colors no one can name
    I am the sky, the sea, the earth.
    I trust yet I fear.
    I hide yet I dont hold anything back.
    I am free
    I am a child becoming an adult.
    I am me, and me is just right.

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: *I am me*

    A simple and unique poem. It's a little short but good job overall. [:

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    Re: *I am me*

    I agree with tifa it is a great poem short yet good and unique keep up the good work friend. I hope to see more from you.
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    Re: *I am me*

    oh, this is good. i am somewhat of a poet myself and like to critique when i can. this one is to the point, but deep, the meaning clear, but subtle all the same.
    i like it.
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