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    I am a mess

    I am the mess...you've made
    I am the one near...the phone.
    I am the one who...lingers at your door.
    I am the heart...you broke.
    I am the thing...dead and cold.
    I am your mind, eating every thought that filters your head.
    I am your soul...now alone.
    I am your memory, frozen and un-fixable.
    I am in this sleep, that goes on and on.
    I am in this palce, I can't run from.
    I am in this film, that the critics hate.
    I am misunderstood, all the time.
    I am falling down, but I'll be fine.


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    "Quit the touchy, feely, self-help, yoga crap!"

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    Re: I am a mess

    interesting style....i like it....but it gets kinda boring if it repeat itsel too many times...for ur case it's " I am " but it's ok...

    i love the ending
    I am misunderstood, all the time.
    I am falling down, but I'll be fine.
    reminds me of me XD

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    Re: I am a mess

    its kinda cold, but i like it

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