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    I am Semblance

    In a place where the sun never ceases
    to shine, where you are always the only thing on my mind.

    In a place whee happiness grows,
    a place I can always go. There is something I miss

    A place where all my child hood toys float in the air,
    a place where you would never see despair.

    I live for the wind that blows through my hair,
    the soft words you whisper in my ear, and the
    dream that the world will change.

    I know I can always find you there in that place
    where I go sometimes to be alone.

    There's a girl I see in this place,
    a girl I've always known. She waves
    to me, I can see the sparkle in her eyes.

    She is me.

    In a place where it never snows or rains,
    where I can always see you smile,
    where the day is always full.

    A place decorated vibrantly to match your eyes.

    A place filled with stars that we can wish upon and make
    those wishes become real.

    A place that is my mind.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: I am Semblance

    I just love this poem!!! You've created such a wonderful place!!!! I adore that place and I know there's a place like that in my mind to, the only difference is that it does rain there and it snows and sometimes it's cold and sometimes it's sad there for I can't be happy without being sad... But the place you've created is just so wonderful and beautiful!!!
    A wonderful work, I'm glad to see that You post a lot and post such good poems!!! Continue this way, I'll be waiting for the next great poem!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: I am Semblance

    hmmm... its very complex, indeed. but i have to say i like the snow, but i hate the ground being all soggy when the snow melts.. im stupid like tha, i guess

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    Re: I am Semblance

    Thats such a creative mind there!!!! Such an amazing poem could have an exciting world!!! It just cheers me up so quickly!!!! I hope to see more in he future!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: I am Semblance

    Thank you all so much!
    I really appreciate everyone's comments. I will be sure to post more of my poetry considering I have so much of it lol. I write very often. Actually I think I will post another right now.
    Dear Dinah...

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