You go sister!
Yeah, Avon isn't very good make-up wears off really quickly.
I like the poem it was so powerful at the beginning, I felt sort of like it died down at the end. Still a very good read, thank you.
They say I should be a girl.
I tell them I was born a girl,
However, I wasn’t born to wear skirts.
When I came out my mother’s womb
I didn’t sport Avon.
But Avon never stayed on
Long enough to keep the masquerade on
My sisters face. She wishes she was a
Boy. Because girls 'they say' are inferior
That our words are the ants and
The man's voice echoes just as loud as Gods do.
I am stronger then any man.
Hippocrates lift weights,
But I lift tons.
Don’t speak down to me.
But voice is like a gun,
And my reason is the bullets.
I’m like the Red Sea.
You cannot cross me
Without God’s permission.
Most men look down on women
As if our only purpose is
To birth babies. If that is true.
Then a man’s duty is to shine
In his desk lamp glory.
I am a woman. The reason the men
In my life didn’t choke on their
Cartoon network Imagination.
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You go sister!
Yeah, Avon isn't very good make-up wears off really quickly.
I like the poem it was so powerful at the beginning, I felt sort of like it died down at the end. Still a very good read, thank you.
Last edited by Zev; Sep 05, 2009 at 01:23 AM.
Signature is a Gwenibe original.
Good job shippo.
i'd have to agree with Zev, the ending isn't as strong as the beginning,
but still a great poem none the less.
I am a woman and i'm proud.
Well done shippo, hope we get another chance to work together one day.
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