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    ''I can live without u''

    now this 1 is from moi heart( ''is cant live without u'' my bad)

    '' baby''
    ''o baby''
    '' I wont give up''
    '' i'll give my soul''
    '' so we can be still be 1''
    '' i got to keep u pleased in anyway i can''
    '' give u evrything my heart speak out''
    '' in anyway i think''
    '' wathever u want''
    '' girl ill do it''
    '' because thats all i want to do''
    '' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for''
    '' here right here my dear i dont have to hope''
    '' or look anymore''
    ''for someone like u''
    '' u made me feel like no one could do''
    '' i wont never give up''
    '' i wont never quit''
    ''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick''
    '' not the way i feel about u''
    ''girl i just cant live without u''
    '' Ill just stay with u''
    ''and do anything u want to do''
    '' u giving me much more than anyone here''
    '' much more than words that just fade''
    '' i learn to fear when ur not along''
    '' i just know i know u so''
    '' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for''
    '' here right here my dear i dont have to hope''
    '' or look anymore''
    ''for someone like u''
    '' u made me feel like no one could do''
    '' i wont never give up''
    '' i wont never quit''
    ''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick''
    '' not the way i feel about u''
    ''girl i just cant live without u''
    '' i will stay here with u and never let u go''
    '' just like the day i first found u''
    Last edited by Baal; Aug 05, 2006 at 10:30 PM.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    You in love my freind? that was a pretty good poem, keep it up.

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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    Just like a soppy love letter, straight from the heart! ^^

    Some bad grammer but whatever, it was a nice sweet poem.

    I found it hard to read, maybe you could make it flow better?

    Still, a very nice poem!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    Quote Originally Posted by Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me View Post
    Just like a soppy love letter, straight from the heart! ^^

    Some bad grammer but whatever, it was a nice sweet poem.

    I found it hard to read, maybe you could make it flow better?

    Still, a very nice poem!
    what hold.me.X.Thrill.me said ^__^
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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    very very good poem!!!!I like it


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    Woah!! I like it! Keep it up!
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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    A desperate lovestruck Prinny dood huh? Hehe. ^^;; That was a sweet poem. I liked it but try to make it flow better and remove those quotation marks. ^^
    *^-^* Thank you SasuraiHell *^-^*


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    Re: ''I can live without u''

    bravo i am taking writing classes and it is better than my teachers poems

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