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Aug 05, 2006, 10:27 PM
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 S.E.L - sexy etna lover  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez
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 Credits: 309 | ''I can live without u'' now this 1 is from moi heart( ''is cant live without u'' my bad) '' baby'' ''o baby'' '' I wont give up'' '' i'll give my soul'' '' so we can be still be 1'' '' i got to keep u pleased in anyway i can'' '' give u evrything my heart speak out'' '' in anyway i think'' '' wathever u want'' '' girl ill do it'' '' because thats all i want to do'' '' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for'' '' here right here my dear i dont have to hope'' '' or look anymore'' ''for someone like u'' '' u made me feel like no one could do'' '' i wont never give up'' '' i wont never quit'' ''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick'' '' not the way i feel about u'' ''girl i just cant live without u'' '' Ill just stay with u'' ''and do anything u want to do'' '' u giving me much more than anyone here'' '' much more than words that just fade'' '' i learn to fear when ur not along'' '' i just know i know u so'' '' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for'' '' here right here my dear i dont have to hope'' '' or look anymore'' ''for someone like u'' '' u made me feel like no one could do'' '' i wont never give up'' '' i wont never quit'' ''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick'' '' not the way i feel about u'' ''girl i just cant live without u'' '' i will stay here with u and never let u go'' '' just like the day i first found u''
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Aug 07, 2006, 07:49 PM
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| I have ACE nashers.  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: SunnyOl'England ;]
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Credits: 4,237 | Re: ''I can live without u'' Just like a soppy love letter, straight from the heart! ^^ Some bad grammer but whatever, it was a nice sweet poem. I found it hard to read, maybe you could make it flow better? Still, a very nice poem!
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Aug 07, 2006, 10:24 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: in the ally taggin ur buildings
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Credits: 725 | Re: ''I can live without u'' Quote:
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Aug 08, 2006, 12:31 PM
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 Getting Married 3-14-09  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning
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Credits: 3,048 | Re: ''I can live without u'' Woah!! I like it! Keep it up!
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Aug 08, 2006, 12:39 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  | Re: ''I can live without u'' A desperate lovestruck Prinny dood huh? Hehe. ^^;; That was a sweet poem. I liked it but try to make it flow better and remove those quotation marks. ^^
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