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Reply With QuoteYou in love my freind? that was a pretty good poem, keep it up.
now this 1 is from moi heart( ''is cant live without u'' my bad)
'' baby''
''o baby''
'' I wont give up''
'' i'll give my soul''
'' so we can be still be 1''
'' i got to keep u pleased in anyway i can''
'' give u evrything my heart speak out''
'' in anyway i think''
'' wathever u want''
'' girl ill do it''
'' because thats all i want to do''
'' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for''
'' here right here my dear i dont have to hope''
'' or look anymore''
''for someone like u''
'' u made me feel like no one could do''
'' i wont never give up''
'' i wont never quit''
''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick''
'' not the way i feel about u''
''girl i just cant live without u''
'' Ill just stay with u''
''and do anything u want to do''
'' u giving me much more than anyone here''
'' much more than words that just fade''
'' i learn to fear when ur not along''
'' i just know i know u so''
'' cuz u girl my girl thats what i was searching for''
'' here right here my dear i dont have to hope''
'' or look anymore''
''for someone like u''
'' u made me feel like no one could do''
'' i wont never give up''
'' i wont never quit''
''cuz if i quit ill be playing stick''
'' not the way i feel about u''
''girl i just cant live without u''
'' i will stay here with u and never let u go''
'' just like the day i first found u''
Last edited by Baal; Aug 05, 2006 at 10:30 PM.
perdoname michelle!
You in love my freind? that was a pretty good poem, keep it up.
Just like a soppy love letter, straight from the heart! ^^
Some bad grammer but whatever, it was a nice sweet poem.
I found it hard to read, maybe you could make it flow better?
Still, a very nice poem!
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
what hold.me.X.Thrill.me said ^__^Originally Posted by Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me
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very very good poem!!!!I like it
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
Woah!! I like it! Keep it up!
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
A desperate lovestruck Prinny dood huh? Hehe. ^^;; That was a sweet poem. I liked it but try to make it flow better and remove those quotation marks. ^^
*^-^* Thank you SasuraiHell *^-^*
bravo i am taking writing classes and it is better than my teachers poems
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