LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With QuoteNot bad, but still better than mine >.<
I really am not good at poetry but I writ it alot sooooo....I'm going to see if it is as bad I think it is or not. Please let me know what you think!!! Hope you like it!!!
”I Can’t See This Through”
Slowly and Desperately,
I fade away...
Abused and painfully,
I try to live another day....
Slowly and Desperately,
My heart beat dies….
Abused and painfully,
I try to stay alive….
Slowly and Desperately,
Death draws near…
Abused and painfully,
I don’t shed a tear…
I stand on thin ice,
It is cracking…
Pain is weighing me down,
Hope, I am lacking…
Nothing left for me to do…
Oh god I can’t see this through!!!
This pain can’t be true…
Oh god I can’t see this through!!!
The icy water turns me blue…
Oh god I can’t see this through!!!
Nearer, Death grew…
Oh god I can’t see this through!!!
Nothing left for me to do…
Oh god I can’t see this through …
All is calm in this eternal sleep; here grief forgets to groan and love to weep.”
-Alexander Pope
*My myspace*
Check out the a cool new site for anime/manga lovers!!!
{Anime Heaven}
Not bad, but still better than mine >.<
Very nice...but not quite positive near the end, but hey, not everything ends well.... *cries*
But seriously, its very nice, no clue if this style has a name, but I don't even know my own style and I keep changing it so no need to staple a style, its what it is and that's all that counts.
So end result, if you can make any kind of emotion pour through your words, I'm sure you could write poems as long as you have something on your mind
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME
U win cookies
I love that poem ^_^
-Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-|THE INFAMOUS CHEETOS OVERLORD||IceNineKills|
It's my style. I'm an odd fuzz puff, but that's just me! I get depressed alot so most of mine aren't too happy. Sorry!Very nice...but not quite positive near the end, but hey, not everything ends well.... *cries*
But seriously, its very nice, no clue if this style has a name, but I don't even know my own style and I keep changing it so no need to staple a style, its what it is and that's all that counts.
So end result, if you can make any kind of emotion pour through your words, I'm sure you could write poems as long as you have something on your mind
All is calm in this eternal sleep; here grief forgets to groan and love to weep.”
-Alexander Pope
*My myspace*
Check out the a cool new site for anime/manga lovers!!!
{Anime Heaven}
No need to be sorry as I said, its your style XD
All ends that ends well...or whatever the saying, hope to see more and that's taht XD
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME
Much love for this poem much.
depression- GOOD....normally ppl write depressing poems...coz well...happy-go-lucky kind of poems isn't rite...but i liked it...especially the style...
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks