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    I Cant Love you!

    Dieing inside the feeling i had
    for you is gone , when you touch me
    i break apart inside , my feelings seem
    so distant from how they once were.

    Love seems like a child's game and
    i feel like i haven't grown inside to
    be with you all i want is to be free
    it may sound selfish but i don't love you,
    i love my life as it was before we met.

    How things got this far and for me
    not to say anything is a mystery , you were
    always there for me over the year we have been
    together , time seems to be against me as i try
    and fail at holding you in my arms.

    Things should have stopped when we first kissed
    but i let them go on and build till you loved me
    unconditionaly that was a tragic thing for me to
    let happen.

    What seems cold to you only makes my life that
    much easier and more comfortable , i drink my coffee
    with a smile relaxed knowing i control how things go
    i do think about how i did you wrong as i sit here

    Don't try to fix me I'm not broken i am just not wanting
    to be with anyone now how can life be so cruel as i just
    walk away while your left with tears and pain and a
    heart that will never trust again?

    Don't blame yourself for what I'm doing i just
    think i cant be with anyone and me leaving you
    is proof that the game of love i played was all
    for my amusement , i thought it cool at first.


    but i fooled around and fell in love and i cant
    undertsnad my feelings when i say i love you
    you feel all these awesome things while i just
    treat it like like another emotion that i cant begin
    to feeling from how i am.

    I am sorry for everything but i cant really handle
    love and cant take on the responsibilty of having you
    with me so move on and forget you ever knew me.
    ________________________________________________

    some people cant feel or love but they try non the less
    and when they finaly decide they cant truly handle love'
    or the person that has fallen for them all the way loving the real them
    they walk away not really feeling anything but numbness and no
    understanding of how they just kissled some one on the inside.

    this poem really brought to kind how things are with me in a way
    but thats not why this poem was wirtten but the afeects could be
    harsh for the one i love and i am sorry for that , anyway this poem
    is for those who cant love but try and end up hurting the ones that love them.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    ouch!!! that was a very good poem..... nice job!! but so sad at the same time... from the title to the ending you can feel the sad breeze... passing through... huhuhu... its just so sad... by the way.. why,, does the person in the poem dont like his lover anymore?? ^^

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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    sad but i love how you express the feelings. very good job i love it
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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    Man that was a harsh poem. It almost brought tears to my eyes because it can be so cruel to have someone love you so much and yet you end up feeling nothing but recentment for them. I guess sometimes you do fall for the wrong one and they end up hurting you, but it's your chance to learn from your mistake and move on.
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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    agreed with the 3... a nicely done poem.. :/ sheesh... thats some guilt.. @.@ good job...
    Would love to read more of urs chris ^^

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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    wow i loved it very nice i cant wait to read more of yours

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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    Whoa......intense!!!!!!
    That poem must have been a lot of work.......but it is wonderful!!!!!!
    Great job!!!!!!
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    Re: I Cant Love you!

    that was a very good poem..... great job!! but so sad at the same time from the title u and the ending u can feel the sadness in it i loved it
    There is never happiness in a place of paon thats why i picked pain

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