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    I can't say it enough

    I can't say it enough
    I love you

    You drive me crazy
    Everything has become hazy

    My heart is bounding
    Your love resounding

    Now I can leap with joy
    To know that I am no ones toy

    I belong to you
    No one could compare

    I love you so much
    I just can't say it enough

    There just isn't enough time in the day
    Not enough time in my life

    To express how I feel
    I want to your ____

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: I can't say it enough

    Awwwww....This such a romance poem!!! It's so romantic really!!!! I hope to see more of your work!
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    Re: I can't say it enough

    To express how I feel
    I want to your ____
    I don't get it.

    Nice poem.. could have been better, though. Overall, I give it a seven // ten.
    I feel as if it lacked description

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    Re: I can't say it enough

    I wanted to be vague about it. And the last line is to someone special. He'll know the meaning. Thanks for the comments and advice.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: I can't say it enough

    I love it great poem !
    It seemed to flow well to me i enjoyed reading it

    And i think the meaning was under stood
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