Thread: I Come To You

This is really unexpected to me and you do a lot of improving now your a genorous perosn that has good poetic skills and I am very appreaciated by you, and also I would like to add that you have created a great poem that when you have problems you can come to whom you really trust please feel free to PM if you have any other problems that I might deal with ok?.

I really like this poem.^_^ It shows passion and I like that in poems. Great work!

I see you improved a lot, which is good! The poem is wonderful, you kept the lines short and you chose the words that went quite well together. Well done!

You've been in proving a lot! I like this poem cause it's so well.... I can't get that word in my head but all I know is that I loved reading it over and over again thats for sure! It's just so good! I hope to see more in the future!

This is really nice. You really poured your soul into it. I feels as if that you could see the person you were speaking of and touching their heart. You truly touched mine. Its good to know that there is still true love in the world we live in.

wahhooo! I love it..
Perfect terms, perfect stanza..
what can i say?
well done there Jamie..
(claps)...

Thanx you guys....

although i am happy to reach you in ways that i never thought i could, I am sorry to say that there is no love from which I write my poems... only the thought that i once loved a guy but he was dating someone else... and eventhough he has told me that he loves me and that i am his world, I know that i will never see him for he is half way around the world... That and the fact that once again i feel as though everyone's life would be much better if i was dead....

but thank you... I'll be sure to write some more for you guys...^^