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    Wink I cry

    I cry in hope
    I cry in sadness
    do u know
    Its not madness

    I cry with tears
    of hope and joy
    to make me say
    "im having a boy"

    so now i hold my baby in my arms
    I look at him giving him no harm
    I give him a kiss goodnight
    and with love he has no fright

    years go by ,my boy has grown
    he's a teenager i could have sworn
    he deals with pressure
    he deals with drugs
    but he knows not to get drunk.

    at last I give my boy a hug
    "its time you move out,you have grown up"
    as I say those last few words
    i think about a baby that used to throw up.
    all those memories I cry.


    hope ya liked it♥~*the (one and only)princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: I cry

    Well it very good.Very good wording and a strong meaning.I liked it.

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    Re: I cry

    True!!!!! Umm..... sorry! But the tears happen for many reason so yeah! So basically YOUR POEM RULES!!!!! I love it!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: I cry

    thanks guys LOL i like recieiving comments on my poems and also tnx 4 da complement bye-♥~*theprincess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: I cry

    hey, that was a great poem, i like it. GOOD JOB!! your poem had a real meaning on life.

    IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
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