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    I didn't title this.

    My inadequite heart beats unsteadily
    As harmful thoughts quickly ready
    My plan for a great escape.

    Escaping the unreality of darkness
    That falls so unrelentless
    On my fragile mind.

    Tears falling hard all the time
    Behind this mask that is mine
    Making it hard to really feel.

    My mind fragments ever quicker
    Then my trust it does flicker
    Just hurry up and do it.

    If you beat them to the chase,
    You never have to plead your case.
    Never ever let them see.

    All the pain and inadequacy held inside
    Instead give them a front of total pride.
    When really I'm just broken.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: I didn't title this.

    i like your word . there a lot of feeling in your poem
    and when read it three tilte came to my mind

    [COLOR="Purple"]1.The chaser 2. Broken fagments of 1's mind 3.The Forgotten [/COLOR

    your peom have alot of power in thy word i enjoed the reading alot keep them comming.

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