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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere on this planet
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![]() ![]() Credits: 310 | i don't belong something inside of my is building benieth the surface something is confusing me into what is real against my own will i stand against my own reflection these wounds are going to be real this fear is tearing my heart apart the fear of this never ending the pain of this never fading fear is how i fall i felt this way before so insecure i ask for what is real i can't hear i can't see i can't feel i can't ........ i don't know why but the curtains are always closing on me i'm searching my mind trying to start again i don't know whats worth fighting for i don't want to be the one to be this i don't know why i came this far knowing i will never be alright i'm the who always fall why don't i just scream why don't i just cry i'm lost in my own fictions and dreams of reality i know the clock ticks and i'm keeping everything locked up inside of me i tried so hard but it deosn't even matter how much i try i pushed as far as i can go i tried so hard and got so far i had to fall to lose it all now i will finally rest from all of this death is the only place for me......... i have no where i belong to....
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| Laid Back Otaku Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: my personal safehaven
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,790 | whoa....lots of metaphors...that sounded so depressing...hopefully this is just a poem and not also how u feel or someone u know feels like...good job |
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: where the true warriors fight
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,275 | Re: i don't belong oh this one is sad my friend but it is very good at the same time ^^ u make great poems ^^ |
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