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Jun 13, 2007, 11:36 PM
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  ★Phantasmagoria★  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish)
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 Credits: 19,839 | I Don't Love You I don't love you. Don't you get it? I never did and never will You were cold And you try to come back to me? I don't think so. You say sorry and that you love me But I don't believe you Like they say Hurt me once, shame on you Hurt me twice, shame on me And I won't make that mistake So don't ask me To come back in your life Because you already know that I don't love you Anymore. |
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Jun 14, 2007, 02:54 AM
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: I Don't Love You Ahh... nice... reminds me of myslef- that's good ^^ I really like this one, especially I love the last two lines: "I don't love you Anymore." I like it because at first you say you have never loved him, but this "anymore" shows that you have loved him and that makes this poem sad, there's mostly anger in this poem but the last line shows a little bit of sadness witch is something that was missing... A great work Akura! ^^ |
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Jun 14, 2007, 02:59 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 5,601 | Re: I Don't Love You the hatred in this poem is awesom and life can offer pleanty of heart breaks , but its how you handle it that makes you either feel used or more free. very cool poem
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Jun 14, 2007, 01:23 PM
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Credits: 5,408 | Re: I Don't Love You wow how hurt and painful that ...that was amazing i love it ... I see many hate here and every one in way in this poem ..very good ... hope to se more...
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Jun 14, 2007, 02:40 PM
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| ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish)
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Credits: 19,839 | Re: I Don't Love You Thank you all! This one took about 3 hours to think up!lol
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Jun 14, 2007, 06:14 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: I Don't Love You I loved it!!! It was just great telling that you just don't love that person!!! It's just great!!!! 
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Jun 14, 2007, 09:25 PM
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| Spoken for.  Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Pancake, A.C.
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Credits: 7,670 | Re: I Don't Love You i liked it as well, especially the question/answer thing that was going on! not very much to critique in this one, good work! i also like the one-word ending as well!
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Jun 15, 2007, 09:35 PM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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Credits: 11,594 | Re: I Don't Love You Hello I totally love your poem it's so incredibly cool!
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Jun 15, 2007, 10:04 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Baguio City, Philippines
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Credits: 358 | Re: I Don't Love You its a nice poem, i got you idea there but.... refusing to love again after a heartbreak is not the most sensible thing to do. you have to set yourself free, never close that door... for a closed heart is the worst prison of all..
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Jun 16, 2007, 12:25 AM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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Credits: 11,594 | Re: I Don't Love You She's my friend and I really don't think she meant it like that she meant that she would never love that person ever again. Not that she would never love again.
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