I don't love you.
Don't you get it?
I never did and never will
You were cold
And you try to come back to me?
I don't think so.
You say sorry and that you love me
But I don't believe you
Like they say
Hurt me once, shame on you
Hurt me twice, shame on me
And I won't make that mistake
So don't ask me
To come back in your life
Because you already know that
I don't love you
Anymore.
Ahh... nice... reminds me of myslef- that's good ^^
I really like this one, especially I love the last two lines:
"I don't love you
Anymore."
I like it because at first you say you have never loved him, but this "anymore" shows that you have loved him and that makes this poem sad, there's mostly anger in this poem but the last line shows a little bit of sadness witch is something that was missing...
A great work Akura! ^^
the hatred in this poem is awesom
and life can offer pleanty of heart
breaks , but its how you handle it
that makes you either feel used or
more free.
very cool poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
wow how hurt and painful that ...that was amazing i love it ...
I see many hate here and every one in way in this poem ..very good ...
hope to se more...
Foolish beating
Thank you all! This one took about 3 hours to think up!lol
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"Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
I loved it!!! It was just great telling that you just don't love that person!!! It's just great!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
i liked it as well, especially the question/answer thing that was going on!
not very much to critique in this one, good work!
i also like the one-word ending as well!
Hello I totally love your poem it's so incredibly cool!
Yeah, Bye.
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