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    I dug a hole...

    I'm digging a hole and it just for me.
    There's only enough room for one person, y'see?
    I tried and I tried with all of my might.
    To keep my emotions from being in sight.
    She wanted to try to be my friend.
    But she's saying I'm too self absorbed in the end.

    I wish I could make her see that she's wrong.
    That she's the one who's been hiding all along.
    Sure I didn't call you, or drop you a line.
    But would you deal with me in pain all the time?

    You wouldn't so I continue to dig this hole.
    I wonder just how far it will go.
    I hope that I can escape from this hurt.
    At least my hole will hide me in dirt.


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    Re: I dug a hole...

    It was a good poem. It's hard wanting someone so bad and just when you think you're close enough to catching them you get dragged farther away and you feel like you have to start all over to win them. I can't wait to read more.
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    Re: I dug a hole...

    Interesting. I like. Great job! Reminds me of the movie holes. XD

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    Re: I dug a hole...

    Wow. You really have a way with words! I think I can see where it's coming from...though it seems that you wanted to say something else but held back. Nice poem. I look foward to reading more of your work
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    Re: I dug a hole...

    Quote Originally Posted by Serenity Carter View Post
    Wow. You really have a way with words! I think I can see where it's coming from...though it seems that you wanted to say something else but held back. Nice poem. I look foward to reading more of your work
    I agree with this person. It's well written and worded but it seems restrained. Like it's only part of what you wanted to get out.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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