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    randomness

    Oh man
    i just messed this thing up
    dude...
    U just pee in a cup?

    There she is
    over there
    the one sitting down
    she has red hair

    do it man
    throw the egg
    hit the car
    just throw the egg
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    Re: I forgot i was lagging

    No real message conveyed in this poem... Or at least, I can't find it.

    You've clearly expressed your thoughts and feelings, but that's useless when they make no sense at all...

    There's a structure, but at the same time there's not. The structure works, but... Think of a tree with decent branches. And instead of leaves hanging off those branches, it's things that don't make sense together at all... And then you're looking more at what's hanging off the branches and trying to figure out what kind of tree this is or even if it is a tree... No attention to the actual trunk or branches. Yeah, this poem is that kind of tree... The kind of trees most people like would have you both appreciating the trunk, the branches, the leaves, and the blossoms.
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    Re: I forgot i was lagging

    Quote Originally Posted by abby724 View Post
    No real message conveyed in this poem... Or at least, I can't find it.

    You've clearly expressed your thoughts and feelings, but that's useless when they make no sense at all...

    There's a structure, but at the same time there's not. The structure works, but... Think of a tree with decent branches. And instead of leaves hanging off those branches, it's things that don't make sense together at all... And then you're looking more at what's hanging off the branches and trying to figure out what kind of tree this is or even if it is a tree... No attention to the actual trunk or branches. Yeah, this poem is that kind of tree... The kind of trees most people like would have you both appreciating the trunk, the branches, the leaves, and the blossoms.
    we it wasnt really ment to mean anything because i posted the same poem twice so i descided to change this one so i didnt get an infraction... it is titled randomness so it isnt really supposed to make sense but oh well
    dont matter cause i didnt post this to be jusdged just to keep myself from gettin introuble with the mods

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    Re: I forgot i was lagging

    I like it.

    Particularly today. I was having one of those severe ADD days. And I could very possibly think about peeing in a cup, girls with red hair, and egging cars all within the time it took to read this poem. So it made sense enough to me.

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    Re: I forgot i was lagging

    Quote Originally Posted by kyzr View Post
    I like it.

    Particularly today. I was having one of those severe ADD days. And I could very possibly think about peeing in a cup, girls with red hair, and egging cars all within the time it took to read this poem. So it made sense enough to me.
    LOL thats great xD i have adhd so i am like glkjshfdlh

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