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    "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    Ever since you left
    My heart been out of place
    You left me with a blank expression upon my face
    I guess all my emotions got gone when you left me w/out a trace
    I wonder why the things I want to get rid of
    I can't erase

    I guess I should say thanks for the memories like Fall Out Boy
    Everytime I think about them I fall out of joy
    A dark sadness falls upon me
    I guess you can say I'm shaded with plenty of unhappy
    A shadow of melancholy
    When it comes to my picture of thoughts
    Of you & me

    I guess I should say you're welcome
    For all the love you received from me
    And then some
    I never really asked for a thank you
    Not even 1nce
    Not expecting one now or one to come

    You always was the opposite of me
    I guess that's why I wanted you to stay
    While you just wanted to run
    It's ludacris cause I got a runaway love
    You're so far gone
    I can't reach your touch

    I didn't know you can love someone too much
    I guess that what happens
    When you can't get enough
    Addicted to your love
    Like it was a drug
    Only thing this intervention
    Is my liquor filled mug

    To help ease the pain away
    You left with my love
    But my hurt you didn't take
    I wonder why the things you want to get rid of
    You can't erase

    "When you live in the past; You die in the future..."
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    Re: "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    :'( i feel like crying now..........
    this poem was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    life without love...is not life at all...love is something that we humans can not live without...its not just something we crave...but something we need....if we didnt have love. . .than ourlives would e nothing but pain...love is something we live for, and would do anything to have.........

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    Re: "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    Quote Originally Posted by iwontletyougo View Post
    :'( i feel like crying now..........
    this poem was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thanks for the comment!!! And yes you are soooo right... I couldn't have said it better myself... Love is one of them things you don't want to live w/out...

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    heh <(^_^)>
    may i ask how are you today??and
    HAPPY 4TH OF JULY.....LATE 4TH OF JULY ACTUALLY LOL.
    life without love...is not life at all...love is something that we humans can not live without...its not just something we crave...but something we need....if we didnt have love. . .than ourlives would e nothing but pain...love is something we live for, and would do anything to have.........

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    Re: "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    Quote Originally Posted by iwontletyougo View Post
    heh <(^_^)>
    may i ask how are you today??and
    HAPPY 4TH OF JULY.....LATE 4TH OF JULY ACTUALLY LOL.
    I am great today... And Thanks!!! Happy 4th of July to you also!!! Well like you said LATE 4th .... So I guess it is just 1 of them late nights where you can't sleep or you just don't want to go to sleep huh.?.

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    Re: "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    *cry* this poem was so good! You are a very good poem writer!!



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    lol yea. . .ctually i go to sleep at this time almost everyday!!XD lol
    life without love...is not life at all...love is something that we humans can not live without...its not just something we crave...but something we need....if we didnt have love. . .than ourlives would e nothing but pain...love is something we live for, and would do anything to have.........

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    Re: "I guess... (You can't erase)"

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    *cry* this poem was so good! You are a very good poem writer!!
    I ppreciate the comment... I don't want any1 to cry though *laughing* ....
    Just joking, but for real I like the compliment & I read a couple of yours myself & you're pretty good yourself...

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