I just love this poem alot. The format is classic and the feeling is raw. The imagry is top of the line but use alittle more. But over all Great work! btw I've noticed but your one one of the few writers that even use metphors in thier writing. And like i know that you cant just come up with a good peom out of thin air. It seems that you revise it before posting it. I applaud you. ^^


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