Thread: I Hate you.

hmm.. sounds like an angry girl there.. @.@ but a bit well..lets say...not too angry yet.. lol ^^ a mild anger...but obviously it is abt a hated person..

and a bit of spelling error..

Its a good poem ^^ keep up the good work... ok sis?

Thanks little bro. I know my spelling suck. I will try to make some more. since this is my first poem that I'v made in my whole life.

Yup train would help ^^ u need more stronger words...and show more hate in there to make it better... if u make another 1 like this... a secret to a sucessful poem is... to... exagravate it more ^^ .. xD am i right guys?

I hate you too

More anger! Insult my mother! rawwwwr!

ps. spelling "stupid" "stuped" is probably a bad idea...

It DOES has a few spelling errors But in other words it's brilliant...^_^ Doesn't rhyme but I like it

-am waiting for more-
-so don't make me wait-



-Zainab

Well I for one like it, it is angry and gritty to the person the anger is for,
that makes this a nice poem.
Iceviper, train and you will be in the potm comp in no time... ok
btw the spelling is not to bad, even if the words are jumbled but the first letter and last letter are in order. anyone can read it. ok

Originally Posted by ice viper

I Hate you for makeing me fell stupied all the time.
That is all that you do make fun of people.
All the time day in and day out.
You are nothing more than a human and nothing less.
But for you to think that you are smarter than anyone I know.
I must say that your wrong dead wrong.
I also know that you tried to control me.
But you were having troubble.
I saw it in your eyes everytime I looked at you.
Now I can say I am away from you for making me fell stuped all the time.
But no matter what anyones says about you.
I know I will always hate you.


I've never done something like this before. So what do you all think?

*is scared*

You must really hate someone . . . it isn't me, is it?