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    i hate you drealy john!!!



    You don’t see my laughing


    Nether see a tear fall from these eyes ...neither for sadness nor for happiness

    I hate what you became...

    I thought I really loved you... when I found out...





    When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so
    I stoped talking to you...





    You tried to talk to me...

    I never answered you



    In texts, msn, school... nothing





    I walk past you my head looking towards the ground and my eyes looking at
    you from the corner of my eye...



    Contemplating I can’t believe I ever was going to be going out with you...
    your scum...






    I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!!





    Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise
    what you lost...


    Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again...

    I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving


    He will be there for me.... on like you john....


    I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you...

    ...but now I realised I'm glad I never when out with you when you asked me
    out...


    I’m also glad my mum and sister was against it...

    So have a fun time with my friends....you just wont be getting me



    Congratulations!!



    I hope you’re happy because I know I am , I have a better
    man than you or anyone can have for whom will stand by me and not flirt
    with my friends...
    Last edited by equinn; Nov 24, 2007 at 02:01 PM.

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    wow thats deep.
    whatever he did, he is going to regret it cuz your a great friends equinn, your a great person

    good poem

    great choice of description words also^^

    it really stuck to me
    Last edited by iluvmyloser; Nov 24, 2007 at 08:52 PM.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    WOW!!!!! WOW!!! Amazing equinn! And my favorite lines are almost everything! But mostly these words got to me really!

    Quote Originally Posted by equinn View Post

    I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!!





    Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise
    what you lost...


    Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again...

    I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving


    He will be there for me.... on like you john....


    I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you...

    ...but now I realised I glad I never when tut with you when you asked me
    out...

    Very very strong words equinn! Plus I'm like honored to be able to read this over and over again! ^^ I really do love this. I want to rate this thread! Yah I'm going to rate it a 5/5 star! ^^ Since this poem is perfect! And equinn whatever he did to you.... I'm sorry... I hope he regrets everything he has done to you.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by equinn View Post
    When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so
    I stoped talking to you...
    This line really made me feel something. I liked how you put it together and how it was said. There is alot of meaning in this line and alot of people can relate to it.

    I also liked how the rest of it flowed. It's sounded really good.

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    thank you gus very much im really glad yous lik the poem i havent ben writing well this past while but h tryed talkin to me and i didnt wanna talk to him at all so i wrote this to get the pain lifted a bit

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    Ouch! I'm glad I'm not John!

    Double-check your spelling. I know this is a lot of raw emotion, but grammar still counts. "Against" - not agents, "unlike" - not on like . . . etc. Just look over it again.

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    thank you very much for the comment and the spelling >< sorry...... lol ^^

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    Re: i hate you drealy john!!!

    heyyy... i love your poems and i realised you really hate him.. lol

    love your poems <3

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