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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,822 | i hate you drealy john!!! You don’t see my laughing Nether see a tear fall from these eyes ...neither for sadness nor for happiness I hate what you became... I thought I really loved you... when I found out... When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so I stoped talking to you... You tried to talk to me... I never answered you In texts, msn, school... nothing I walk past you my head looking towards the ground and my eyes looking at you from the corner of my eye... Contemplating I can’t believe I ever was going to be going out with you... your scum... I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!! Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise what you lost... Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again... I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving He will be there for me.... on like you john.... I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you... ...but now I realised I'm glad I never when out with you when you asked me out... I’m also glad my mum and sister was against it... So have a fun time with my friends....you just wont be getting me Congratulations!! I hope you’re happy because I know I am , I have a better man than you or anyone can have for whom will stand by me and not flirt with my friends...
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![]() Credits: 11,594 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! wow thats deep. whatever he did, he is going to regret it cuz your a great friends equinn, your a great person good poem great choice of description words also^^ it really stuck to me
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![]() Credits: 13,226 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! WOW!!!!! WOW!!! Amazing equinn! And my favorite lines are almost everything! But mostly these words got to me really! Quote:
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![]() Credits: 10,866 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! Quote:
I also liked how the rest of it flowed. It's sounded really good.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,822 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! thank you gus very much im really glad yous lik the poem i havent ben writing well this past while but h tryed talkin to me and i didnt wanna talk to him at all so i wrote this to get the pain lifted a bit
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,274 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! Ouch! I'm glad I'm not John! Double-check your spelling. I know this is a lot of raw emotion, but grammar still counts. "Against" - not agents, "unlike" - not on like . . . etc. Just look over it again.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,822 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! thank you very much for the comment and the spelling >< sorry...... lol ^^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,781 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! OH WOW!! LOVE YOUR POEM EQUINN!!! ITS LIKE REALLY GOOD!! I would have to say that you putting in the little "....." those things at the end it added more of a like I dont want to finish the scentence and thats what made me love the poem even more. So yea I love it!! Keep it up and cant wait to see more!!!!! |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 16,731 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! Geez, work on your spelling first of all, and if you don't have a dictionary, type it in Microsoft Word. For example: - "on like you" which is supposed to be "unlike you". Other than that, the idea you present is clear, however there has to be a flow to it. Like ... your previous poems are about how you met a guy and/or lost him, this one is the same ... "I'm glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving". Make it a poem ... I hope I wasn't too harsh. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,822 | Re: i hate you drealy john!!! nah rushil i dont min th harush comments even though i perfer the good ones lol but thanks
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