i hate you drealy john!!!

*equinn* · Nov 24, 2007, 10:57 AM

You don’t see my laughing

Nether see a tear fall from these eyes ...neither for sadness nor for happiness

I hate what you became...

I thought I really loved you... when I found out...

When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so
I stoped talking to you...

You tried to talk to me...

I never answered you

In texts, msn, school... nothing

I walk past you my head looking towards the ground and my eyes looking at
you from the corner of my eye...

Contemplating I can’t believe I ever was going to be going out with you...
your scum...

I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!!

Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise
what you lost...

Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again...

I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving

He will be there for me.... on like you john....

I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you...

...but now I realised I'm glad I never when out with you when you asked me
out...

I’m also glad my mum and sister was against it...

So have a fun time with my friends....you just wont be getting me

Congratulations!!

I hope you’re happy because I know I am , I have a better
man than you or anyone can have for whom will stand by me and not flirt
with my friends...

iluvmyloser · Nov 24, 2007, 11:01 AM

wow thats deep.
whatever he did, he is going to regret it cuz your a great friends equinn, your a great person

good poem

great choice of description words also^^

it really stuck to me

KuwiRules145 · Nov 24, 2007, 11:38 AM

WOW!!!!! WOW!!! Amazing equinn! And my favorite lines are almost everything! But mostly these words got to me really!

Quote:

Originally Posted by equinn

I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!!

Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise
what you lost...

Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again...

I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving

He will be there for me.... on like you john....

I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you...

...but now I realised I glad I never when tut with you when you asked me
out...

Very very strong words equinn! Plus I'm like honored to be able to read this over and over again! ^^ I really do love this. I want to rate this thread! Yah I'm going to rate it a 5/5 star! ^^ Since this poem is perfect! And equinn whatever he did to you.... I'm sorry... I hope he regrets everything he has done to you.

fireandice · Nov 24, 2007, 12:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by equinn

When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so
I stoped talking to you...

This line really made me feel something. I liked how you put it together and how it was said. There is alot of meaning in this line and alot of people can relate to it.

I also liked how the rest of it flowed. It's sounded really good.

*equinn* · Nov 24, 2007, 01:53 PM

thank you gus very much im really glad yous lik the poem i havent ben writing well this past while but h tryed talkin to me and i didnt wanna talk to him at all so i wrote this to get the pain lifted a bit

*divine_punishment* · Nov 24, 2007, 01:56 PM

Ouch! I'm glad I'm not John!

Double-check your spelling. I know this is a lot of raw emotion, but grammar still counts. "Against" - not agents, "unlike" - not on like . . . etc. Just look over it again.

*equinn* · Nov 24, 2007, 02:01 PM

thank you very much for the comment and the spelling >< sorry...... lol ^^

TeenageTragity · Nov 24, 2007, 03:20 PM

heyyy... i love your poems and i realised you really hate him.. lol

love your poems <3

*P.R. Princess* · Nov 24, 2007, 03:31 PM

OH WOW!!
LOVE YOUR POEM EQUINN!!!

ITS LIKE REALLY GOOD!!

I would have to say that you putting in the little "....." those things at the end it added more of a like I dont want to finish the scentence and thats what made me love the poem even more.

So yea I love it!!
Keep it up and cant wait to see more!!!!!

*Rave_Grip* · Nov 24, 2007, 06:45 PM

Geez, work on your spelling first of all, and if you don't have a dictionary, type it in Microsoft Word.
For example: - "on like you" which is supposed to be "unlike you".
Other than that, the idea you present is clear, however there has to be a flow to it.
Like ... your previous poems are about how you met a guy and/or lost him, this one is the same ...
"I'm glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving".
Make it a poem ...

I hope I wasn't too harsh.

*equinn* · Nov 25, 2007, 04:25 AM

nah rushil i dont min th harush comments even though i perfer the good ones lol but thanks

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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,682 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,822	i hate you drealy john!!! You don’t see my laughing Nether see a tear fall from these eyes ...neither for sadness nor for happiness I hate what you became... I thought I really loved you... when I found out... When I found out history was repeating... I didn’t want to be hurt again... so I stoped talking to you... You tried to talk to me... I never answered you In texts, msn, school... nothing I walk past you my head looking towards the ground and my eyes looking at you from the corner of my eye... Contemplating I can’t believe I ever was going to be going out with you... your scum... I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!!!! Have fun being a sex crazed using teenager and I hope to God you realise what you lost... Because I’m never having interaction in anyway with you again... I’m glad my new boyfriend is wise and loving He will be there for me.... on like you john.... I really thought I liked you maybe even loved you... ...but now I realised I'm glad I never when out with you when you asked me out... I’m also glad my mum and sister was against it... So have a fun time with my friends....you just wont be getting me Congratulations!! I hope you’re happy because I know I am , I have a better man than you or anyone can have for whom will stand by me and not flirt with my friends... __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/ Last edited by equinn; Nov 24, 2007 at 02:01 PM.
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