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    I hope I'm okay

    How come I'm here?
    taking up space
    I don't serve a purpose
    I'll never get a date
    No one likes me
    It all seems to me
    one great big scam
    They all smile acting like nothings wrong
    but I know what they are thinking
    why don't you just run along....
    They don't want me here and
    I think the same way
    Let's get out of here
    Let's run away
    One day I'll belong
    You'll see I say
    I think to myself
    "I hope I'm right"
    "I hope I'm okay"
    because I don't think I'll be able
    to live another day

    Foolish beating

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    Re: I hope I'm okay

    :/ hmm... this is a speaking from ur concious.. sheesh...ppl have this thoughts in their mind... sheesh.. :/ but it is a normal thing.. ^^ it's a good poem my friend ^^

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    Re: I hope I'm okay

    I can understand where you are coming from with your poem. I have these thoughts runing thru my mind all the time now. Tho I've been though this once before and everything will be alright, just hang in there. Good work keep it up.

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    Re: I hope I'm okay

    Wow.... seemed like the poetic version of a breakdown. I get that way alot. I like how this was written too, no breaks. So it seemed like a panic attack almost... Or maybe thats just how I read it.
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