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    i hope we are ok

    i hope we are still ok
    i hope our love will continue to be everlasting
    i am sorry if i hurt you in any way but you hurt me
    i thought you pityed me
    i thought you felt guilty
    but i was wrong

    i never shouldve been snooping around
    i never shouldve hurt you
    i cried myself to sleep last night hoping you wont leave me
    i was on my way to dakota just to see you last night
    i was on my way to stop you from leaving
    i loved you so muh i was willing to risking everything

    my love for you still burns like fire and is everlasting
    just hearing you say you love me makes me giggle in delight
    i love you so much and i want you to know
    although i hurt you i am sorry
    and hope you can forgive me.
    baby im sorry but you hurt me more than you know
    i hope we are still ok baby and i hope we can forever be
    until you and i meet again i will be waiting
    waiting for you to love me again
    waiting for you and i to be together again
    until then i hope we are ok.


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    Wow... speechless... it's like you transfered the real life situations and your feelings into this poem. I truly adore it. I love it.

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    im not really in to poems but its a good 1 in my opinion

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    Great job on the poem. I really liked it. It made me think of how I felt after I broke up with 3 of my boyfriends. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

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    Wow! This one truly shows how sorry you are for hurting this other person! I mean it was expressed in every line of this poem! Awesome job Princesslady!

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    *claps* that was a nice poem, i really like it. The pic that you add to it, reflects the mood of the poem.

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    thanks. i just express what i feel. i dont try i just write what i feel.

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    That was beautyful lady and great Keep expressing
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