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Sep 29, 2006, 11:03 AM
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 He loves me not  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in a castle up north
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 Credits: 5,374 | i hope we are ok i hope we are still ok i hope our love will continue to be everlasting i am sorry if i hurt you in any way but you hurt me i thought you pityed me i thought you felt guilty but i was wrong i never shouldve been snooping around i never shouldve hurt you i cried myself to sleep last night hoping you wont leave me i was on my way to dakota just to see you last night i was on my way to stop you from leaving i loved you so muh i was willing to risking everything my love for you still burns like fire and is everlasting just hearing you say you love me makes me giggle in delight i love you so much and i want you to know although i hurt you i am sorry and hope you can forgive me. baby im sorry but you hurt me more than you know i hope we are still ok baby and i hope we can forever be until you and i meet again i will be waiting waiting for you to love me again waiting for you and i to be together again until then i hope we are ok. 
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Sep 29, 2006, 06:41 PM
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| I hate idiots on AO. Kill  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion.
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Credits: 14,832 | Wow... speechless... it's like you transfered the real life situations and your feelings into this poem. I truly adore it. I love it.
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Sep 30, 2006, 09:23 AM
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 Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,336 | Great job on the poem. I really liked it. It made me think of how I felt after I broke up with 3 of my boyfriends. I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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Sep 30, 2006, 10:20 AM
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| Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Wow! This one truly shows how sorry you are for hurting this other person! I mean it was expressed in every line of this poem! Awesome job Princesslady! 
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Oct 02, 2006, 09:34 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana
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