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    I hope you know.

    "I hope you know what you're doing."
    The words float in my head.
    And the thoughts they stir.

    But what good is hope,
    If the cause is lost?
    Does faith not mean you'll be unsure?

    Let someone else want,
    for what they've been told...
    ...they're never gonna get.

    My pain was a waste.
    Like my wasted time.
    Just as useless as regret.

    I tried to light the candle.
    To ignite a flame.
    But I just recieved a burn.

    Couldn't express my feelings...
    ...Without being exploited.
    Getting drama in return.

    Take the tears,
    misguided hopes.
    I have to let it go.

    To prune my tree,
    Of dying leaves.
    And maybe I will grow.

    My goal,
    Is never to regret.
    Just finally surrender.

    Because this place,
    Inside my heart...
    ... I always will remember.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I hope you know.

    A great poem!!! I was really glad to return from three days no-internet and read this ^^ this is something that makes me love this place...

    This poem really charmed me somehow... I like the way you've writen this- it's charming somehow... lovely...

    As always I'll be waiting for the next one ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: I hope you know.

    Hmmm charming? I wasnt expecting this poem to be described as such, but... thanks! I'll take it and run.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I hope you know.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Hmmm charming? I wasnt expecting this poem to be described as such, but... thanks! I'll take it and run.
    Yes, charming in the way that it... enchanted me somehow... I know it sounds strange but it is strange... it's something in the way you've written it... or maybe I just should get some more sleep ^^ lol

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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