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    Unhappy I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    I cry
    Cry out for your help in an obligation
    And you refuse my invitation
    I don’t matter anymore
    An old toy that keeps ending up in your bed
    I stay
    And am riddled by my logic
    Maybe its out of pity
    That we wasted all this time
    I’m hanging from my own noose
    I wish
    That you’d change and make an explosion for old times
    Set lost feelings on fire for me
    But I think my real wish is that
    I wasn’t with you
    Because I am warn out by meaning nothing to you
    I break
    You bruise my arms and bloody my heart
    Towering hatred upon me
    To freak me into submission
    Forcing me to leave
    But I cry in fear and I stay alone
    And I wish in the dark and then I break like water
    All that’s left
    Is my mistake, I should have left you today.
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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    *Open arms*

    Reading your poems make me a bit sad Myssy...write one about Me yeah? It should be hilarious!

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    hmm, I'm thinking about TBS, don't know quite why.....

    pretty cold, I thought the mood was going to get a bit better near the end but I guess not.

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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    I just wrote that about the past 20 minutes... i really am not happy right now, im getting in the shower, be back soon.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    wow! this is great work! Such despair, such emotion! It just makes me want to draw! Thanks for the inspiration. And you know where I am if you wanna talk

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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    But I think my real wish is that
    I wasn’t with you
    Because I am warn out by meaning nothing to you
    I break
    You bruise my arms and bloody my heart
    I really enjoyed reading this poem, Nympho. I am sorry to hear that you are not in a pleasant mood today..... but it was a well written poem, nonetheless. ^_^

    Very visual and descriptive also.

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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    Quote Originally Posted by Nympho
    I just wrote that about the past 20 minutes... i really am not happy right now, im getting in the shower, be back soon.
    yeah, good luck washing off all that anger and bitterness while you're at it
    pretty good poem, for being as long as it is and written so fast

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    Re: I just Wanna Break you Down So Badly

    i like this poem you cant get much
    more tragic than this very awesome
    poem i cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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