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    I just wanna go home.

    I just wanna go home.
    There's nothing for me here.
    No friends to keep my company,
    nobody to keep me in cheer.

    Just let me leave already!
    Because I'm goin' nuts!
    I'm gettin' stir-crazy just
    sittin' here on my butt!

    I just wanna go home.
    I'm having a bad day.
    I don't wanna do my work,
    and I don't wanna play.

    Let me out of this cage!
    Dammit! When can I just go!
    This day really sucks and
    it's goin' by too slow!!

    I just wanna go home.
    Is that so wrong???
    I've been sitting here
    mad as hell all day long!!

    Can I break out of here?
    Nope, but I can try to be slick.
    Oh wait, nevermind I already
    called in sick.

    I just wanna go home.
    People are trying my patience.
    I wanna slap the faces off
    of all these egg-heads!

    I just wanna go home.
    I'm tired of this life...
    At least when I'm home,
    I can forget the day and enjoy my night.


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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    I just wanna go home.
    There's nothing for me here.
    No friends to keep my company,
    nobody to keep me in cheer.

    Just let me leave already!
    Because I'm goin' nuts!
    I'm gettin' stir-crazy just
    sittin' here on my butt!

    I just wanna go home.
    I'm having a bad day.
    I don't wanna do my work,
    and I don't wanna play.

    Let me out of this cage!
    Dammit! When can I just go!
    This day really sucks and
    it's goin' by too slow!!

    I just wanna go home.
    Is that so wrong???
    I've been sitting here
    mad as hell all day long!!

    Can I break out of here?
    Nope, but I can try to be slick.
    Oh wait, nevermind I already
    called in sick.

    I just wanna go home.
    People are trying my patience.
    I wanna slap the faces off
    of all these egg-heads!

    I just wanna go home.
    I'm tired of this life...
    At least when I'm home,
    I can forget the day and enjoy my night.
    omg that was awsome good job i love it i hope you right more

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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    Yea... at least you know where your home is...

    I like this poem quite well, it has strong feelings in it- anger mostly... and sadness...
    This made me remember something- the only time when I thought "I want to go home" for real (no, I've never really meaned it at other times, not even in school (ok if I'd work longer than for a month then maybe I could think that in work))- and it was when I was lying in my bfs hands- why that was a bad thing to understand...

    A nice work anyways, I enjoyed reading it, missed your poetry I guess ^^ I'll be waiting for the next one!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    that is a great poem. i love it. thats just how i feel at school lol. i hope u keep writing love your poems!!

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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    Thanks alot to all of you! ^_^ I didn't think anyone would like my ranting, "I'm having a bad day" poem. LOL.

    Really, thanks. It made my day a little better. ^_^ I appreciate it.


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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    *sigh* that was a nice poem... almost like the sound of a crying violon.
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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    Quote Originally Posted by alchemistmaster101 View Post
    *sigh* that was a nice poem... almost like the sound of a crying violon.
    Y'know, you sigh an awful lot. You okay? LOL.

    Thanks for your comment, I appreciate your input.


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    Re: I just wanna go home.

    I really like this poem i think it's one of the best ones i've read on ao in a very long time!!! good job!!!

    thank you equinn

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