Thread: I just wanna go home.

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

I just wanna go home.
There's nothing for me here.
No friends to keep my company,
nobody to keep me in cheer.

Just let me leave already!
Because I'm goin' nuts!
I'm gettin' stir-crazy just
sittin' here on my butt!

I just wanna go home.
I'm having a bad day.
I don't wanna do my work,
and I don't wanna play.

Let me out of this cage!
Dammit! When can I just go!
This day really sucks and
it's goin' by too slow!!

I just wanna go home.
Is that so wrong???
I've been sitting here
mad as hell all day long!!

Can I break out of here?
Nope, but I can try to be slick.
Oh wait, nevermind I already
called in sick.

I just wanna go home.
People are trying my patience.
I wanna slap the faces off
of all these egg-heads!

I just wanna go home.
I'm tired of this life...
At least when I'm home,
I can forget the day and enjoy my night.

omg that was awsome good job i love it i hope you right more

Yea... at least you know where your home is...

I like this poem quite well, it has strong feelings in it- anger mostly... and sadness...
This made me remember something- the only time when I thought "I want to go home" for real (no, I've never really meaned it at other times, not even in school (ok if I'd work longer than for a month then maybe I could think that in work))- and it was when I was lying in my bfs hands- why that was a bad thing to understand...

A nice work anyways, I enjoyed reading it, missed your poetry I guess ^^ I'll be waiting for the next one!

that is a great poem. i love it. thats just how i feel at school lol. i hope u keep writing love your poems!!

Thanks alot to all of you! ^_^ I didn't think anyone would like my ranting, "I'm having a bad day" poem. LOL.

Really, thanks. It made my day a little better. ^_^ I appreciate it.

*sigh* that was a nice poem... almost like the sound of a crying violon.

Originally Posted by alchemistmaster101

*sigh* that was a nice poem... almost like the sound of a crying violon.

Y'know, you sigh an awful lot. You okay? LOL.

Thanks for your comment, I appreciate your input.

I really like this poem i think it's one of the best ones i've read on ao in a very long time!!! good job!!!