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    ~I Know My Love~

    I know my Love by his way of walking
    And I know my love by his way of talking
    And I know my love dressed in a suit of blue
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    There is a dance house in Mar’dyke
    And there my true love goes every night
    He takes a strange one upon his knee
    And don’t you think now that vexes me

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    If my Love knew I could wash and wring
    If my Love knew I could weave and spin
    I would make a dress all of the finest kind
    But the want of money sure leaves me behind

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    I know my Love is an arrant rover
    I know he’ll wander the wide world over
    In dear old Ireland he’ll no longer tarry
    And an English one he is sure to marry

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Hmm.. this is like a song.. lol ^^ it's cute.. nicely done... but the rhyme is a bit off though.. or..u are not rhyming...

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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Hmm.. this is like a song.. lol ^^ it's cute.. nicely done... but the rhyme is a bit off though.. or..u are not rhyming...

    no i wasn't trying to rhyme.. i have never tried to rhyme.. it just happens when it happens...

    thank you. I'm glad you thought so.

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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Im stunned once again... you werent trying to rhyme? The rhyming was so perfect to me! Even the words that didnt rhyme, somehow... they sounded simular enough when read aloud.
    This really does sound like a song, are you a musician?
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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Im stunned once again... you werent trying to rhyme? The rhyming was so perfect to me! Even the words that didnt rhyme, somehow... they sounded simular enough when read aloud.
    This really does sound like a song, are you a musician?
    The best singer at my old school and yes.. i am.. I love to sing and do often.

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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    this is a cool poem Jamie is was awsome. keep up the good work alright?
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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    I know my Love by his way of walking
    And I know my love by his way of talking
    And I know my love dressed in a suit of blue
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    There is a dance house in Mar’dyke
    And there my true love goes every night
    He takes a strange one upon his knee
    And don’t you think now that vexes me

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    If my Love knew I could wash and wring
    If my Love knew I could weave and spin
    I would make a dress all of the finest kind
    But the want of money sure leaves me behind

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    I know my Love is an arrant rover
    I know he’ll wander the wide world over
    In dear old Ireland he’ll no longer tarry
    And an English one he is sure to marry

    And still she cried I love him the best
    And a troubled mind sure can know no rest
    And still she cried Bonny boys are few
    And if my Love leaves me what will I do

    I like the two different perspectives in this poem! And it's references to England! WHOOT!

    There were a few misspellings, but I think we all understand what you're saying. It's so sweet! Bonny boys are few . . . but not as few as bonny girls like you.

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    Re: ~I Know My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by divine_punishment View Post
    I like the two different perspectives in this poem! And it's references to England! WHOOT!

    There were a few misspellings, but I think we all understand what you're saying. It's so sweet! Bonny boys are few . . . but not as few as bonny girls like you.
    lol yea i know.. but hey.. that only proves that no one's perfect.

    ^-^ thanks. It's sweet of you to say that.

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