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    But now I know...

    When you find true love
    When you know that it exists
    Then the lover that you miss
    Will come to your side at those cold, cold nights
    And you'll know it hold such bliss
    Then the lover that you kissed
    Will comfort you when theres no hope in sight

    Sadness in my eyes
    No one guessed, well no one tried
    You smile at me
    With no cruel intentions
    Loveless and cold I felt
    With your last breath you saved me from myself
    Was I to blame?
    You kissed me like no one else
    And what I have learned
    From all those tears that where caused
    I've waited for all those years for you
    Then just when it began
    He took your love away
    But I still say

    For those words you could not say
    Ill say them for you
    And the love we would have made
    I'll make it for two
    For every single memory
    Has become a part of me

    You will always be...

    My Love

    Well Ive been loved
    So I now know what that is
    And the lover that I kissed is always by my side
    Oh the lover I still miss
    ~~~


    Yea wrote this a long time ago~

    I think I was in 9th Grade.. (Feels old) >.<;
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    Re: I know now

    wow! this is a good one. very nice! great job! *thinks* i wish i could tell him...
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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    Re: I know now

    awww thats sooo sweet TT___TT ^__^ awww k i just loved the whole thing and i can see you put alot of work into it ^_^
    Last edited by equinn; Sep 23, 2006 at 09:37 AM.

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    aawww tht's nice kat...keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: I know now

    Your poems are getting better, Mr. K. You should write more, and share all the ones that you have already written. We all would love to read them. I loved reading all your previous compositions. This poem was no different, I enjoyed reading it. Very lovely, it was, might I add. But...

    You got kissed when you were only in your 9th grade? ^,^

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    Re: I know now

    Very nice poem, sweet and unique. Keep it up! Nice use of words and emtions

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    NOt bad for writing that in 9th grade, I like it.

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    Wow! This was really good Mr.K! I liked it alot! The emotions are very stong in this poem.Awesome job.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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