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    i laugh

    i laugh at your remarks
    i laugh to your anger towrds me
    i dont really care if you love me or hate me

    if you really care give me some space
    if you really care get the hell out my face
    you took him from me and he never came back
    and now our friendship is out the door never to be seen again

    it pains me to see you act like it never happened and you never betrayed me
    it kills me to see you tell your friends everything is cool when it isn't
    your my backstabbing friend and a triflin bitch
    and i hope you go to hell with the rest of you iggnorance

    i laugh at your remarks
    i laugh at your anger towrds me
    i really dont care if you love me or hate me

    Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen

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    Hmmm.... very realistic and bitter poem Chanel... nice use of words, I love it!

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    Like rave_grip said its a very bitter poem, but I still like it.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    grammar problems and too repetitive

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    hm.. realistic. good job!

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    I like this poem! Awesome job, and all I have to say is who ever the person is that stabbed you in the back needs to read this poem! The bitterness and anger are awesome just jumps out at the reader!

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    I love this poem, i don't mind the grammar as long as the message is understood.

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    thank you. i actually usedf my anger on another topic but i used cheating to replace my true anger. but thanks. i just spoke what i felt

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