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Reply With QuoteYou rarely see the anaphor. This was a very good example of a style most find awkward. There was a time when all your poems were the same. You have shown remarkable improvement!
lost my way
I lost my self
I lost my life
I lost my soul..
I lost into myself...
I went to any other way...
I found out that I lost myself into your blissful world
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
You rarely see the anaphor. This was a very good example of a style most find awkward. There was a time when all your poems were the same. You have shown remarkable improvement!
Last edited by beast; Mar 30, 2010 at 02:56 PM.
receiverofhell (Mar 30, 2010)
i have not read much of your work but from what i gather you are still learning you are doing good keep it up and try all stylesOriginally Posted by receiverofhell
i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility
receiverofhell (Mar 30, 2010)
THANK YOU!...as you know I have been busy with school works projects..etc..
But know it's vacation time!
I write poems again this time..
THANKS ALOT to bot of you
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
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